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Do you write poetry?

  • Yep, a lot of it!

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  • Yeah, but not a lot

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  • Only a few poems, usually for classes

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  • No, I only write them for school.

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  • No, but I want to start. Can I have some tips?

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Have some poetry you want TT to hear? Post it! It can be any kind, a haiku, ballad, any type. And it doesn't have to rhyme.

I have one, I wrote it for English class:

unstoppable

as i walk around

at recess, down the hallways,

or off the school bus,

i hear the annoying rhyme.

"joey and alyssa sittin in a tree,

k-i-s-s-i-n-g."

i've hated it

ever since it began.

yes, i may be going out with him,

but it's the rhyme that bugs me.

well, it's so immature!

i tell them to shut their traps,

but they never listen

and they continue.

please, please

shut up.

pft, like they'll listen.

it's everywhere.

i still hate it.

shut up, dang it!

Don't feel shy to post it.

If you can't write a poem about something, try thinking of something on your mind like school, friends, anything.

Guides: Please do not edit the poems in this topic, as that is censorship.

 
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heres a nice little poem its called mametchis book

poor mametchi lost his book

so he thought he might take a look

he looked up

he looked down

he looked all around

yay he found his book

so there was no more need to look

hope it was cool

~otchi973~

 
I'm no good at poems but I am really good at Haikus!

Here is a Haiku I've made:

Tina wants her water

No more water!

She runs to the store

'Out of stock' the sign said

She quickly buys lemonade

She has no money to buy it

She cries out saying,"

Why is the world so cruel!! "

or atleast i think its a haiku :huh: ... I don't know!! :furawatchi:

 
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I didn't find it sad:

Crying.

I didn't find it sad, crying.

I didn't find it sad, lying.

So I ran in-front of a fast car.

And I didn't find it sad, dying.

 
I write songs and lyrics. I like writing something that can be put into singing and guitar and stuff like that.

I write poems sometimes too, and I have to write them alot for my L.A class.

 
I'm no good at poems but I am really good at Haikus! Here is a Haiku I've made:

Tina wants her water

No more water!

She runs to the store

'Out of stock' the sign said

She quickly buys lemonade

She has no money to buy it

She cries out saying,"

Why is the world so cruel!! "

or atleast i think its a haiku :blink: ... I don't know!! :blink:
Nice poem, but I don't think it's a Haiku.

A Haiku has it's own structure thats goes like this --

1st Line - 5 Sylables (sp?)

2nd Line - 7

3rd - 5

Usually Haikus are about nature, but not always. :) Have fun with it. :blink:

 
I got a poem (please dont steal for a reason)

Winter

winter

its seems not to go away

i wish it would last for one day

i like the snow but its too cold

i cant stand the winter anymore

 
I didn't find it sad:
Crying.

I didn't find it sad, crying.

I didn't find it sad, lying.

So I ran in-front of a fast car.

And I didn't find it sad, dying.
*sniff* you didn't find that sad. :eek:

BTW This is an example of a haiku -

Why is the snow here?

It's almost the end of March.

I wish it was gone.

 
DO U LOVE ME OR DO U NOT

U PROBALY TOLD ME ONCE

IM CERTaIN I FORGOT

TELL ME NOW

TELL THE TRUTH

SO I CAN SAY

I LOVE U TOO

OF ALL THE GUYS

IVE EVR MET

UR THE 1

IM NOT GONNA FORGET

AND IF I DIE

BEFORE U DO

ILL G2 HEAVEN

& WAIT 4 U

ILL SEE MY FRIENDS

MY PAST AND FUTRE

AND WHEN I SEE U

I WILL SAY

I LOVE You

there :eek:

 
For saphires we are held here

Only you can end our fear

Blue Skys turn Grey

In each and everyway

 
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u read Seris of unforanet events!!!! i lov that
sry off topic
yep I'm on book 11 Opps sorry hold on I'll write another peom I heart.

Everytime I look in the clouds

I see the ghost of a pretty girl with

a pretty blouse

 
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My liitle poem called silly sally

SILLY SALLY

Silly Sally sat in her seat,

then Silly Sally sneezed a snorty sneeze,

She went up soaring in the sky,

All she left were a pair of size 9!

 
*goes seaching* found it! My little cousin (but little i mean about a year younger) she wrote this about child abuse:

Our parents would bite me,

and scratch me with tin,

they beat me and fight me,

I can not win.

my name is kate,

and i am only eight

i have an older sister,

my mom used to kiss her,

but now my mom hates me,

ever since i said i miss her,

because Marcie has been dead,

for 2 years and ahead.

I hear my dad come through the door,

his feet stomp loudly on the floor,

i quietly peek out from behind the wall,

He yells and says i am too small,

he grabs a knife,

amies at me,

he throws it hard,

i can not see,

it hits the wall,

i starty to bawl,

i run to my room,

he follows too.

i shut my door,

he throws it open,

he grabs my hair,

which he tares,

i scream in pain,

he does not hear,

i say where is my daddy?

he says i am right here

as he grabs my neck,

squeses hard,

i can't breathe,

He rasie me high,

drops me hard,

he slams the door,

as i die on the floor.

My name is Kate,

and i am only eight,

as i lay here,

drowning in blood and hate.

so sad. :blink:

~Reanna

 
Wow, I wish I could write poetry like you all.

Here's something I wrote a while ago about 9/11. But be warned it's rather sad and not all of it rhymes.

I sit up all night waiting.

I wish my Mum and Dad were here.

I sit up all night crying.

As shreiks of laughter fade away,

And turn into screams of pain.

I think of them in heaven thinking the exact same.

The crashes killed the towers.

The bombs snapped my heart.

Is love truly and miss you lots.

Wishing you were here and thinking all the same.

 
(mine is about Franklin D. Roosevelt, his wife is eleanor, and he had polio, which means he was paralyzed in his legs. While his presidency he did the "New Deal" to pull america out of deppresion in the 1930's)

New Deal

by: ME

"Franklin, Franklin, how could this be?

Have you not worked, and toiled endlessly?

Franklin, Franklin, what do you say?

How did you feel on that horrible day?"

"Eleanor what can I say?

I felt nothing, nothing, my legs were so numb

I had felt like I was struck dumb.

Yet there was a hope, shining dimly but near,

It is that I will be President my dear!

I feel nothing of fear for myself, or my legs without feel

But my country needs something, something called the

New Deal"

 
You can fall from below

You can fall from above

But the best fall

Is to fall in LOVE

(My friend made a simillar one to this but I switched some words...so it ain't copying right?)

 
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