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Please feel free to comment, don't hold anything back. Yes the truth hurts, and the key to being a good artist is to learn from your mistakes, and have a critic! In my opinon.. :ph34r:

There's a bit to much mess in the background... :mimitchi:

Here's is my Chef Kirby (I know, to much food in the background that messes it up, and the erases... https://i3.tinypic.com/2vvmic5.jpg

Here's my Torchic (This is not my best Torchic) I've made better ones, but I lost them :wacko: . https://i14.tinypic.com/48vvsed.jpg

Here's Pikachu! https://i3.tinypic.com/4boco4o.jpg

Last but not least here's my fav Pokemon MUDKIP!! :D https://i11.tinypic.com/4bggt2t.jpg

Ok these are not my best, and not really good though.

Please Comment!! :lol: ;)

 
The torchic looks cute! Its one of my fave pokemon!

 
I ♥ the pokemon, they're so cute! I can't say the same about Kirby, because my bro's obbsesed with him. :( But it's still really good! :D

 
Those are nice :]

I do hate to give a lot of constructive criticism, but since you seem to be prepared, here I go:

Try to use thinner lines, and smoother strokes

Spare the eraser for times when you really need it, and until after the drawing is done. That way you can see if you like your drawing how it is, or fix some things. It also saves more eraser ;D

This goes for every artist in training: If you have good willpower (well, even if you don't xD), practice every single day, and practice hard. If you're a human artist, search up some anatomy lessons. If you have problems with certain parts, I suggest going on deviantart.com and search up anatomy lessons there. Say you have trouble with hands. Search 'hand tutorial'. DA is where I learned to draw a lot of stuff/draw a lot of stuff better. And I mean a lot xD If you like to draw animals, do the same, only with animal anatomy and animal parts. Same goes with pretty much everything else, except landscapes and the such. Maybe search 'landscape tutorial'? xD

I'll shut up now <_<

xD

 
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OMG they r sooooo CUTE!!!! im a good artist exept i dunno if i could draw the pikachu's ears and torchic.......stuff like that.......

my tips:

1) on mudkip the two hands on that one side looks weird...

2) the kirby cheif is um......well........kinda bad........

3) on the crown of kirby cheif u might wana make the crown sharper.......in my opinion.........

4) hmm........well.......actually there is no 4.......... xD

OVERALL EVERYTHING LOOKS AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!

/// :( nlopez2

 
just practice to make it look less.... um.... unrealistic.

 
Thanks! :eek: I will take you guys tips, trust me I'm going to work hard on ERASING! Trust me I use it all the time to much.

 
I can tell what they are, that's the main thing. The lines are a bit heavy though. That's the only down-side to your drwings in my opinion

 
WOW!! There great Locky, love Pikachu. If you need any help in colouring and graphics I will help you out. But you seem pretty good, you could probably do it all by your self. I can't wait to see the finished product.

Good Luck Locky,

SFF

 
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