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Posted 07 November 2007 - 04:22 AM ( #1 )

i think that i am a really good poet and i am gonna take request for poems i can write for you you can ask for a happy poem depressing poem goodbye poem welcome poem anything just ask and i will post it here!

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Posted 07 November 2007 - 03:57 PM ( #2 )

Ok, cool!
Could I have a poem about Independence?
Thanks!

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Posted 07 November 2007 - 11:22 PM ( #3 )

May I have a poem about life?

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Posted 08 November 2007 - 12:21 AM ( #4 )

Life:
Im loving life and i love being free,
watching the waves in the sea,
seeing the moutains slowly climb higher,
watching the lands being burnt by fire,
seeing a baby being born in this world,
watching a ball forced to be hurled,
Listening to the chirp of a new born bird,
running a race and then coming third,
this place we call home is made up of so many things,
but its life itself that gives us wings.

Independence:
The sound of marching feet on the freshed paved ground,
hearing the protesters makeing thier sound,
they are fighting for something,
something important to all,
with out this thing the world would surely fall,
we grow into this,
and it becomes a bliss,
of life and freedom and its like our first kiss,
its when we first leave the nest,
and start to show our best,
its something we will all eventually have to make of scence,
the thing im talking about is independence.


tell me what you think and thx for replien anyone else

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Posted 08 November 2007 - 01:19 AM ( #5 )

You rule! Can I have one about randomness?

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Posted 08 November 2007 - 02:23 AM ( #6 )

Randomness:
Being random is so much fun,
you can be random out in the sun,
you can be random out in the rain,
you can be random when someones in pain,
you can be random when no ones around,
you can be random without making a sound,
because being random is we do,
but there are only a few who,
can be as random as life itself,
And being random is good for our health.

tada anyone else?

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Posted 08 November 2007 - 10:41 AM ( #7 )

Um...Save the seals poem?

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Posted 08 November 2007 - 02:59 PM ( #8 )

Its graceful, its bliss,
It makes me want to say something like this!

See? Even I could rhyme :P
I love it. Once I get hold of my profile, I will add it there.
Great job again!


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Posted 08 November 2007 - 05:52 PM ( #9 )

Can I have one about child abuse, like not to do it?

Edited by Crowfrost, 08 November 2007 - 06:08 PM.


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Posted 09 November 2007 - 01:49 AM ( #10 )

Save the seals:
Can you see that animal?
Washed up on the shore,
its crying out for something,
something it wants more,
it wishes it could play freely in the sea,
it wishes it was free,
your asking me what caused this animal,
to suffer and to die,
it was us that did this to it,
but people will say its a lie,
WE DIDN'T DO IT!
thats what they would shout,
and all the little children,
take not of thier parents and pout,
but some people care for cretures,
these creatures are the seal,
the seal needs to live, play and feal,
so please remember this
SAVE THE SEAL!

Child abuse:
"NO MUMMY!" little Sophie cried,
"YOU DESERVE IT!" her mummy lied,
"But please mummy i did no worng!"
"Yes you have, you've lied to me all along!"
but little sophie had not lied, she had not been naughty,
she had not cried,
all her life shes watched her mum,
smoke and drink and have great fun,
she did all of this while little sophie hid,
she hid from her mum and all the other scum,
until that night when sophie's mum went mad,
and bashed her hard because she thought she was bad,
sophie couldn't take anymore,
so she left this world all bruised and sore,
but if you don't want to be doing this,
or if you don't want to become this,
be kind to children,
and love love them dear,
because you never know when you become thier worst fear.

anymore?

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Posted 09 November 2007 - 06:16 PM ( #11 )

Thanks! Can I have another one? Anout Love, nhim not knowig until its gone?

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Posted 09 November 2007 - 07:44 PM ( #12 )

Only knowing when its gone:
He always lied,
she always cried,
he never cared,
until the day she died,
he never thought he loved her
he never made it out to be,
but she loved him but he could not see,
he brushed her off,
more times than a few,
he left time and time again,
but he always came but saying he was new,
she took him back but her friends could see,
that he and her wern't ment to be,
until that faithful day in the car,
he realised her love for her wasn't that far,
his heart ached when she was gone,
and he'd sit in his room and quietly mourn,
why oh why didn't he love her dear,
like she loved him because her love wasn't mere,
and as he layed that rose upon her grave,
he promised to keep his love for her,
he promised to save,
the ones he held dear,
and not make them become his fear,
because he did love her,
he loved her so much,
but he didn't take the time to show her and such.

please keep 'em comin' ^^ i love writing these

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Posted 09 November 2007 - 08:16 PM ( #13 )

=O can I have one about pie please?

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Posted 09 November 2007 - 08:18 PM ( #14 )

Only knowing when its gone:
He always lied,
she always cried,
he never cared,
until the day she died,
he never thought he loved her
he never made it out to be,
but she loved him but he could not see,
he brushed her off,
more times than a few,
he left time and time again,
but he always came but saying he was new,
she took him back but her friends could see,
that he and her wern't ment to be,
until that faithful day in the car,
he realised her love for her wasn't that far,
his heart ached when she was gone,
and he'd sit in his room and quietly mourn,
why oh why didn't he love her dear,
like she loved him because her love wasn't mere,
and as he layed that rose upon her grave,
he promised to keep his love for her,
he promised to save,
the ones he held dear,
and not make them become his fear,
because he did love her,
he loved her so much,
but he didn't take the time to show her and such.

please keep 'em comin' ^^ i love writing these

O-M-G- I LURVE IT!

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Posted 09 November 2007 - 11:15 PM ( #15 )

=O can I have one about pie please?

O_O pie...ok...

Pie:
It comes in all different flavours,
flavours that make you stop and savour,
thier delicious aroma flies through the air,
some of them you will not share,
thier delicious taste runs through your mouth,
they can be found anywhere,
north east west and south,
some of them can't be beat,
especially ones with lots of meat,
they make everthing,
come and sing,
a ode to this fabulous food,
flies everywhere will have to be shood,
people often scream "MY OH MY",
"this really is a delicious pie"

please more please

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Posted 09 November 2007 - 11:17 PM ( #16 )

Can I have one about Philosophy ?

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Posted 10 November 2007 - 03:05 AM ( #17 )

Can I have one about Philosophy ?

-.-' im sorry but i don'tknow what that means

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Posted 10 November 2007 - 07:30 AM ( #18 )

Your amazing O_O

can I have one about someone sacraficing themselves for someone, but that person didnt care?

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Posted 11 November 2007 - 07:26 AM ( #19 )

Save the seals:
Can you see that animal?
Washed up on the shore,
its crying out for something,
something it wants more,
it wishes it could play freely in the sea,
it wishes it was free,
your asking me what caused this animal,
to suffer and to die,
it was us that did this to it,
but people will say its a lie,
WE DIDN'T DO IT!
thats what they would shout,
and all the little children,
take not of thier parents and pout,
but some people care for cretures,
these creatures are the seal,
the seal needs to live, play and feal,
so please remember this
SAVE THE SEAL!

Thankyou! I'll put it in my siggy

EDIT: Oh crud it's too long, thanks anyway!

Edited by Missbehave, 11 November 2007 - 07:30 AM.