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Crowfrost

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I had an idea, This based off of my real life, all characters I know except for Anthony and Cody so far:

Chapter one:

The small group, consisting of four girls stood, laughing in the hallway.

“I wonder what their talking about,” Muttered one of the boys who was standing nearby.

“Me.” murmured another.

“Jon’s party.” said another.

The others stared at him in shock “How do YOU know?” the other two said in unison.

“Easy!” said the boy “Listen.”

 

Over the laughs and giggled you could hear “Jon…Party…Friday…Wear…” and other snips of the conversation. “You know, Sadie isn’t going.” whispered the last boy to the first “Now Michael, how do you know this?”

“HELLO, BRAINLESS? She isn’t laughing or talking.”

“Oh.” Said the first boy, who’s long golden brown hair covered his strange yellow eyes, above his freckles and perfect teeth.

“Right,” Said the second, his short buzz cut was dark brown and his eyes blue.

“Yea.” Said the last one, his Dark brown hair, long enough to flip, went to one side of his deep brown eyes and his simple smile. “Lets go Drew, Cory.” He muttered as the bell rang and the girls laughed a little bit and walked in separate directions, only two stayed together. Savannah and Gina, they laughed uncontrollably as they reached their lockers, Savannah’s shoulder length golden hair was straight and faded from the top to the bottom, the bottom the lightest. While Gina’s darker golden hair, still the same shade overall, fell to her mid-back, it was light at the top and dark brown on the bottom. They grabbed what looked like their book bags and walked off, to geography.

 

After Geography Gina and Savannah parted ways, laughing one last time and waving goodbye as Gina met up with Stacey, who’s black hair went to her shoulders, chopped in messy layers, Savannah met up with Sadie, her dark brown hair went to her chest and was thin, her brown eyes were glinting happily as she walked. They both walked to different classes, each one as fun as the other.

Finally the classes ended and lunch period began, Savannah and Gina met up yet again, along with Sadie and Stacey, Savannah dashed ahead, but Gina pushed her, making her drop her purse, it scattered money, folded notes, her assignment slips, and a sketchpad onto the floor, Savannah quickly crammed it all into her purse, a black shoulder bag with wolves drawn in white ink on it, obviously Gina’s favorite pen. Savannah managed to grab the last pudding, some cake and a piece of pizza before someone else did, she quickly trotted over to Gina, Stacey and Sadie at the table, she sat in her spot, at the end of the table, left side, second chair, while Gina took the first chair on the left side while Sadie took the second right, and Stacey took the first right chair. The goofs took their spots, Conner next to Sadie and Don next to Savannah. Of course, there was food being tossed at people, a bunch of laughing, and some ‘Ouch’s’ from the table, no one sat any closer to them than five or six chairs away, the next table. One time Savannah had been waving around a pretzel, showing Conner something when she turned around and wacked Gina in the head with the pretzel, of course Gina elbowed her in the stomach after that but it was overall a good laugh.

 
Middle school all over again. D:

Just kidding! It's interesting. The guys I knew then were not that smart and observant! <_<

One thing I noticed, periods instead of comas. Like "Michal, yew smell," said Jon. It's a coma, not a period. If it's supposed to be a period in a quote, you put a coma. Unless it's like, Jon said, "Michal, yew smell." THEN you put the period.

 

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