Tamagirl_Desy
Well-known member
I decided to pull out a few old songs I wrote and see which ones you like the best. 
''Out of Mind, Out of Sight'' is a song I just wrote today, but the rest are a little older.
Out of Mind, Out of Sight
I was walkin passed your house late at night
Wasn't sure if knockin was really alright
I was gettin kinda chilly so I pulled up my sleeves
Still wondering why you actually had to leave
Cause I...
Could have been your lover
Could have been your girl too
Now I don't know what to do
All I can think about is how I lost you
Cause everything it felt just right
Out of mind, out of sight
I'm sitting in the same spot where we first gazed into eachother's eyes
You don't know how hard it was to say goodbye
I spent three hours crying alone that night
Out of mind, out of sight
Wasn't sure what I was doing
Didn't know who I was fooling
Cause I...
Could have been your lover
Could have been your girl too
Now I don't know what to do
All I can think about is how I lost you
Cause everything it felt just right
Out of mind, out of sight
Give me a little bit of time
In sad chorus we chime
My empty heart is missing you
Oh yeah, it's true
Can't you see my hopeless dreams?
My sanity is ripping at the seams
Oh oh oh oh
I-I-I-I-I am out of mind, out of sight
I-I-I-I-I'm not gonna lose this fight
It's time to turn the lights out
It's time to close my eyes
But with each lasting moment
My broken heart shall die
Cause I...
Could have been your lover
Could have been your girl too
Now I don't know what to do
All I can think about is how I lost you
Cause everything it felt just right
Out of mind, out of sight
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Being a Preteen ((this is more of a poem))
I may not always be nice
And my heart may be very hard to find
People are always telling me
That I'm special, one of a kind!
Sometimes I hate the world
And all the people in it
I often think everyones against me
Making me throw a huge fit
I get heartbroken to tears
Get caught in my fears
I get emotional and sad
And I'm often called mad
I scream and yell and burst out crying
All my stress and emotions are flying!
I am not a child
And not yet an adult
I'm unqiue
I'm in between
Yes, you guessed it
I'm a pre-teen
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It's Hard Not To Cry
As I watch you walk away
As I know you'll never stay
You'll never kiss my cheek
Your power is makin me weak
I'll always think of you
Don't let us drift away
Just because I didn't know what to say
In times like these
It's so hard not to cry
In times like these
It's so hard to say goodbye
Just thinking about you everyday
Has made my heart go crazy
And now that I'm not with you
I don't know what I'll do
Oh, god
Why are you doing this to me?
Is it because I'm not worthy?
Is this fate of mine meant to be?
I need him in my life
I need him by my side
In times like these
It's so hard not to cry
In times like these
It's so hard to say goodbye
Just thinking about you everyday
Has made my heart go crazy
And now that I'm not with you
I don't know what I'll do
It seems like I've lost some of my life
I'm slipping and I don't know if I can come back
It's really hard to keep track
I know I can never keep you here with me
If that's the way it is, then that's the way it shall be
In times like these
It's so hard not to cry
In times like these
It's so hard to say goodbye
Just thinking about you everyday
Has made my heart go crazy
And now that I'm not with you
I don't know what I'll do
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That Song
I keep listening to that song
It's stuck inside my head
It speaks words that were never said
I press ''play'' for the millionth time
I want you to be mine
Tears fill up in my eyes
Nothing can hold back my cry
If I told you that I didn't love you
That would be a lie
I keep listening to that song
I cant stop no matter what I do
Why?
Its the song that reminds me of you
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And if you dont like my type of music, don't reply. ^^ I'm perfectly fine if you don't like my style of writing, but don't come psoting about it...I'm asking which one you like the best, and I'm not asking for advice on how to improve. Just letting you know.
''Out of Mind, Out of Sight'' is a song I just wrote today, but the rest are a little older. Out of Mind, Out of Sight
I was walkin passed your house late at night
Wasn't sure if knockin was really alright
I was gettin kinda chilly so I pulled up my sleeves
Still wondering why you actually had to leave
Cause I...
Could have been your lover
Could have been your girl too
Now I don't know what to do
All I can think about is how I lost you
Cause everything it felt just right
Out of mind, out of sight
I'm sitting in the same spot where we first gazed into eachother's eyes
You don't know how hard it was to say goodbye
I spent three hours crying alone that night
Out of mind, out of sight
Wasn't sure what I was doing
Didn't know who I was fooling
Cause I...
Could have been your lover
Could have been your girl too
Now I don't know what to do
All I can think about is how I lost you
Cause everything it felt just right
Out of mind, out of sight
Give me a little bit of time
In sad chorus we chime
My empty heart is missing you
Oh yeah, it's true
Can't you see my hopeless dreams?
My sanity is ripping at the seams
Oh oh oh oh
I-I-I-I-I am out of mind, out of sight
I-I-I-I-I'm not gonna lose this fight
It's time to turn the lights out
It's time to close my eyes
But with each lasting moment
My broken heart shall die
Cause I...
Could have been your lover
Could have been your girl too
Now I don't know what to do
All I can think about is how I lost you
Cause everything it felt just right
Out of mind, out of sight
--------------------------------------------------
Being a Preteen ((this is more of a poem))
I may not always be nice
And my heart may be very hard to find
People are always telling me
That I'm special, one of a kind!
Sometimes I hate the world
And all the people in it
I often think everyones against me
Making me throw a huge fit
I get heartbroken to tears
Get caught in my fears
I get emotional and sad
And I'm often called mad
I scream and yell and burst out crying
All my stress and emotions are flying!
I am not a child
And not yet an adult
I'm unqiue
I'm in between
Yes, you guessed it
I'm a pre-teen
---------------------------------
It's Hard Not To Cry
As I watch you walk away
As I know you'll never stay
You'll never kiss my cheek
Your power is makin me weak
I'll always think of you
Don't let us drift away
Just because I didn't know what to say
In times like these
It's so hard not to cry
In times like these
It's so hard to say goodbye
Just thinking about you everyday
Has made my heart go crazy
And now that I'm not with you
I don't know what I'll do
Oh, god
Why are you doing this to me?
Is it because I'm not worthy?
Is this fate of mine meant to be?
I need him in my life
I need him by my side
In times like these
It's so hard not to cry
In times like these
It's so hard to say goodbye
Just thinking about you everyday
Has made my heart go crazy
And now that I'm not with you
I don't know what I'll do
It seems like I've lost some of my life
I'm slipping and I don't know if I can come back
It's really hard to keep track
I know I can never keep you here with me
If that's the way it is, then that's the way it shall be
In times like these
It's so hard not to cry
In times like these
It's so hard to say goodbye
Just thinking about you everyday
Has made my heart go crazy
And now that I'm not with you
I don't know what I'll do
-------------------------------------------
That Song
I keep listening to that song
It's stuck inside my head
It speaks words that were never said
I press ''play'' for the millionth time
I want you to be mine
Tears fill up in my eyes
Nothing can hold back my cry
If I told you that I didn't love you
That would be a lie
I keep listening to that song
I cant stop no matter what I do
Why?
Its the song that reminds me of you
-------------------------------------------------------
And if you dont like my type of music, don't reply. ^^ I'm perfectly fine if you don't like my style of writing, but don't come psoting about it...I'm asking which one you like the best, and I'm not asking for advice on how to improve. Just letting you know.
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