Disappearing- My song lyrics

I love writing song lyrics so here goes,

Disappearing

You left so long agoOOOoooo

No sign of you anywhere

Not on the internet, No no nooooo.

So its called Disappearing?

Did you leave because of me?

Hating isnt to bad,

So why not let it beEEE?

*Chorus*

So why not let it beeee

Why not let it beeee

Why not let it beeee

I'm Knock, Knock, Knocking

On everyones door

Oh Yeah, Oh yeahhhhh

Just lying on the floorrr

Is it because of me?

You left suddenly...

No Traces of you anywhere

Maybe I shouldnt care?

*Chorus*

Maybe I shouldnt care

I shouldnt care

I shouldnt care

You left so long agoOOOoooo

No sign of you anywhere

Not on the internet, No no nooooo.

So its called Disappearing?

Did you leave because of me?

Hating isnt to bad,

Maybe I should Leave...

*Chorus*

Should Leave

Leave

Leaveeeeeee....

How do you like it? As you can see I changed the end bit to the first bit.

Hm...

I think you have a great potential but the words just didn't really flow. Maybe you should pick a different topic?

And I was a little confused about which part was the chorus.

Also, try adding more lyrics in.

If you practice, you'll become amazing in no time! Writing songs/lyrics takes real work and concentration.

If you need any help, just ask.

Happy writing! ^^

((Don't PM me because for some odd reason the site won't allow me to PM you back D)

Thanks for the tip TamaGirl_Desy. I've got to admit your are fantastic though!