~*.:Elmo:.*~
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Well I've been having dreams and the dreams sort of go in a story plot. The dreams have reoccuring characters that never really change (except for this one part) and I have been looking forward to going to sleep lately because I no that there will be a new adventure waiting in my dream. So today I though "What the heck, I'm gonna put these dreams on paper" and so here I am. These are just random lines from the very begging of the 'series' if I'll call it that.
-AHEM-
Ari took off the hulster and chucked it on her bed lazily, railgun falling half out as it hit the surface. She threw her jacket off and it landed on the floor gracefully as she walked over to her window she gazed out of it, deep inside she felt something coming.
"Do you get pleasure in hurting people?" The girl who was shrouded in the shadows asked curtly. "I-I, that's, NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!" The crook yelled as he threw the beaten man back on the ground. The girl was furious at his answer and she pulled open a old style japanese fan. The man looked at it as it shone brightly in the dark. "Then go away!" The girl yelled as she swiped the fan at the man, the enormous wind pushed him right out of the alley and into the middle of the street. By the time he barely managed to look back for the girl she was gone.
"Is it ready yet?" Asked a man all dressed in military uniform asked a woman who was in a white lab coat, her blonde hair hung down to the middle of her back, her eyes as blue as the sky in summer. She nodded and pressed a button on the control panel infront of her. The large test tube, that was big enough to hold a full grown man, opened and a young girl, no older than 11 walked out. Her hair was black and it hung roughly down to the back of her knees. "Ava, say hello" the woman gestured to the military man. "Hello" the girl said without a wince of expression in her tone or face. "Ava?" The man questioned. The lady nodded, "Automatic Achiver" The woman answerd, "but the 'V'..." the man was cut off by the woman walking over to the desk. She pulled out a piece of paper and she wrote, automaticVachiver. "The 'V' is purely made for decoration. The man nodded and walked out. "Come on Ava, lets get you some clothes" the lady smiled.
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Ok those are the 3 main characters in the story, please tell me what you think.
-AHEM-
Ari took off the hulster and chucked it on her bed lazily, railgun falling half out as it hit the surface. She threw her jacket off and it landed on the floor gracefully as she walked over to her window she gazed out of it, deep inside she felt something coming.
"Do you get pleasure in hurting people?" The girl who was shrouded in the shadows asked curtly. "I-I, that's, NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!" The crook yelled as he threw the beaten man back on the ground. The girl was furious at his answer and she pulled open a old style japanese fan. The man looked at it as it shone brightly in the dark. "Then go away!" The girl yelled as she swiped the fan at the man, the enormous wind pushed him right out of the alley and into the middle of the street. By the time he barely managed to look back for the girl she was gone.
"Is it ready yet?" Asked a man all dressed in military uniform asked a woman who was in a white lab coat, her blonde hair hung down to the middle of her back, her eyes as blue as the sky in summer. She nodded and pressed a button on the control panel infront of her. The large test tube, that was big enough to hold a full grown man, opened and a young girl, no older than 11 walked out. Her hair was black and it hung roughly down to the back of her knees. "Ava, say hello" the woman gestured to the military man. "Hello" the girl said without a wince of expression in her tone or face. "Ava?" The man questioned. The lady nodded, "Automatic Achiver" The woman answerd, "but the 'V'..." the man was cut off by the woman walking over to the desk. She pulled out a piece of paper and she wrote, automaticVachiver. "The 'V' is purely made for decoration. The man nodded and walked out. "Come on Ava, lets get you some clothes" the lady smiled.
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Ok those are the 3 main characters in the story, please tell me what you think.
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