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^-^ you just rate the poem above you from 1-10

rules:

1. no rude comments please, just advice if you have any

2. no copying other's poems (that a member wrote)

3. You are allowed to use a famous poet's poetry, just write the name of the author

here is mine

The Melody Of The Rain

Gray skies, are all I see.

The rain drops pour down.

The sky is crying, the sky is crying.

Whistling winds, the pitter-patter of the rain..

Music to my ears, love, it's music to my ears.

The wind is singing, the wind is singing.

"Come along, we shall dance in the rain."

But you stare at me, 'there is no music'

"The winds are blowing, the rain is pouring..

The leaves are dancing, how would they be dancing to no music?"

The leaves are dancing, the leaves are dancing.

"Come along with me, under the clouds.. beneath the sorrowful sky..

We shall dance, into the gray. We shall fade."

It is no storm... a symphony, a symphony more beautiful than any...

Come dance with me in the rain... the rain, the sky, the wind. They are my music.

The sky is crying, the sky is crying.

The wind is singing, the wind is singing.

The leaves are dancing, the leaves are dancing.

It’s all music to my ears.

by me, Samantha

10/10

Dream of sea,

Dream of ships,

Dream of huge ocean,

Dream of men in unifom

Its my dream, dream so different,

Dream so new, dream of dark sky up above,

Dream of sea so calm, dream of sea roaring,

Its my sweet dream.

Dream of men in white, in white applet,

Dream of be one with them,

Dream so sweet, wonderfull, specail, close to my heart,

Its my sweet dream.

Dreaming to get my dreams happen.

Its my sweet dream.

This is a poem by Janet Kavitha

10/10

The Fallen Angel

She is the Fallen Angel,

Forever trapped in the sorrowful abyss.

She tries to fly,

but her heart is too heavy..

Her wings have shattered.

Tears stream down her cheeks as she thinks to herself..

'If I put my mind to it, I can do it.'

But she can't... she only falls back in.

She is the Fallen Angel,

Trapped in the abyss, dying.

by me, Samantha

8/10

Herm...

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Without

This is a party

...without the people

This is a song

...without the music

This is a book

...without the words

This is a dance

...without the steps

And this is me

,,,without the "e"

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Ok, so I didn't really make that up.

But I make the last part. I don't know who made that, so *anomyons*

mametchi

9/10

Beneath The Stars

Stars,

they shine so bright

As we see one fall,

We wish with all our might

I want to be with you forever,

And this night to not end, never

Stand with me,

Beneath this tree..

Beneath the stars,

That's where we are

by me, Samantha

8/10

I can't think of any, so:

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Dance In The Rain (I don't know the title!)

My heart, my love~ The wind is howling,

 

............ The rain drops are pouring.

 

~Music to my ears~ You say 'My god, such a storm'

 

..................... All I can say is..

 

..... X.x Would you care for a dance in the rain? x.X

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By Samantha, aka Jinx3295's siggy.

mametchi

10/10

I wrote this myself, The short version is in my sig. Here goes...

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Shadows, By: Rebecca

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The smallest light

shines,

In the darkest of

rooms,

But, the brightest

light,

Casts the darkest

shadow.

10/10

[SIZE=14pt] The Rose.. Does It Really Mean..?[/SIZE]

Why do roses represent love?

A beautiful flower indeed..

It really foreshadows.

‘Roses represent love, but remember..

Your love may seem wonderful now.

But do remember, every rose has it’s thorns..’

Love is the thorn in your finger,

The prick of that rose.

Hold it to your nose,

What a delightful scent..

But is that rose, really worth what you spent?

by me, Samantha

6 1/2

Sometimes you feel that the world has ended

And the life you live isn't quite as you intended

You think your life is drained of all hope

You wonder how long you'll be able to cope

Remember there is still happiness and laughter

And there is such thing as happily ever after

By Me

Don't really understand it! 8.5/10

Mine is quite short and rubbish!

Christmas comes and

Christmas goes and

Life flies by like

Awful woes!

By me!