neroli jasmine
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tigers paw
BANG a gun shot and a tiger was on the ground
“Mum” said the tiger’s cub
“Run” said the mother trying to get up but failed.
The cub didn’t want to leave but she ran her orange and black strips where a blur.
The cub slowed down she was tired and hungry she was still on milk.
What happened to my mum she thought.
She laid down and went to sleep.
you thoughts if it suck tell me im still wrting okay
and nothing about grammar,putaion or spelling im working on it okay
BANG a gun shot and a tiger was on the ground
“Mum” said the tiger’s cub
“Run” said the mother trying to get up but failed.
The cub didn’t want to leave but she ran her orange and black strips where a blur.
The cub slowed down she was tired and hungry she was still on milk.
What happened to my mum she thought.
She laid down and went to sleep.
you thoughts if it suck tell me im still wrting okay
and nothing about grammar,putaion or spelling im working on it okay
