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Jake sped across the open grass plains. It was raining, and the grass was soaked with water. The rain was splashing in his hair, and water was trickling down his cheeks, arms and legs. Jake felt uncomfortable, running in the rain, with his clothes drenched. It was his own fault, anyway, having to run through the rain.
Jake was over a friend's house, and his mum told him to be home at 5:00pm. But Jake, mischievous, cheeky, spiky black hair, with a sly smile, couldn't help disobeying his mum. And now, he suffers the consequences.
Jake halted in front of a small house, with white bricks and a red tiled roof. "Mum's gonna kill me..." groaned as he walked up the steps to his house.
"JAKE TYSON!" Jake's mum yelled as Jake walked into the house, soaking wet. "Sorry, mum," Jake mumbled as he trudged off to the bathroom to have a nice, warm shower. His mum walked off, muttering some swear words as she picked up a mop and started wiping his wet footprints on the floor boards.
After Jake had a shower, he walked to his room. He jumped on his bed, and grabbed a comic book off a wooden bed side table. It was titled "Jetstream Fighters" and it was about a group of heroic people, who are known as the Jetstream Fighters. They save the world from evil villians and they ride eagles that are as fast as jets.
"I wish I was a Jetstream fighter..."wished Jake, as he put the comic book back on the bedside table.
Suddenly, a glittering tornado formed out of no where, and swept Jake away with it. The comic book was going to receive a new character.
Thanks for reading! Please rate it, and if it's good enough, I will make the next chapter.
Jake was over a friend's house, and his mum told him to be home at 5:00pm. But Jake, mischievous, cheeky, spiky black hair, with a sly smile, couldn't help disobeying his mum. And now, he suffers the consequences.
Jake halted in front of a small house, with white bricks and a red tiled roof. "Mum's gonna kill me..." groaned as he walked up the steps to his house.
"JAKE TYSON!" Jake's mum yelled as Jake walked into the house, soaking wet. "Sorry, mum," Jake mumbled as he trudged off to the bathroom to have a nice, warm shower. His mum walked off, muttering some swear words as she picked up a mop and started wiping his wet footprints on the floor boards.
After Jake had a shower, he walked to his room. He jumped on his bed, and grabbed a comic book off a wooden bed side table. It was titled "Jetstream Fighters" and it was about a group of heroic people, who are known as the Jetstream Fighters. They save the world from evil villians and they ride eagles that are as fast as jets.
"I wish I was a Jetstream fighter..."wished Jake, as he put the comic book back on the bedside table.
Suddenly, a glittering tornado formed out of no where, and swept Jake away with it. The comic book was going to receive a new character.
Thanks for reading! Please rate it, and if it's good enough, I will make the next chapter.
