These past few days I've seen many great fanfictions and I decided to write one myself. I know it still needs a LOT of editing, but I don't plan on becoming an author or anything xD I just wrote this for fun.
Anyway, just so no one will get confused, I'll tell you what's going on. In the movie, Moon Child, an orphan named Sho meets a vampire named Kei. They both became very great friends and they become so close, as in brothers. So this woman named Yi-chen comes in the picture right? And Sho falls immediately in love with her. He swears she's his true love. Only the problem is, Yi-chen is in love with Kei. So it's a love triangle right there. xP If you want to see the movie go search it on google or something xD It's my favorite movie :3 I love Hyde(guy who plays kei)
Okay, now for the japanese lyrics. Those are a tune that Kei is always humming/singing in the movie. it means Orange Glow. Kei had a bestfriend, he'd stare into the ocean with him. But since they're vampires, they couldn't see the sun. So when his friend dies, he's staring out into the ocean, and the sun is coming out. His last words are "Here comes the sun" So that's why kei loves that song so much xPP
Now on to the story!
Oh! And you can criticize if you want, but don't go off saying THIS SUCKS because that hurts
I made this for fun.
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ORENJI NO TAIYO
'Kei. . .'
Orenji no...taiyou..
You're beauitiful when you smile.
"Heh."
Her dark hues wandered up at the cloudless sky. Her feet became cold and chills ran up her body, as the small, salty waves touched her feet. Yi-chen was alone this night. She wanted time alone. Her gaze lost in the ocean. She'd been thinking about Kei this whole time, her love for him wouldn't stop growing, little by little. She felt like crying. As if Kei had broken her heart. But no, that's not true. She felt like if Kei..didn't love her. She knew he didn't love her. But why?
Silence.
"What are you doing out here..?"
Kei...? Yi-che turned around suddenly, and stared at him. He didn't say her name.. He was so mysterious. She stared at him, quietly.
Kei smirked at her, his hands in his pockets. He kicked the sand playfully with his foot as he walked and looked down.
Yi-che couldn't help but stare at his beauty. He brought darkness into her..but she felt wonderful. It was such an odd feeling, she loved it. She bit her bottom lip gently, and stood up quickly.
"So..what's your answer..?"
He chuckled.
She wanted to tell him everything. Everything she felt for him. Her hands trembled and she looked down desperately.
"...."
Nakisou na... kao o shi te... eien no... sayonara..
He hummed the tune softly, and very gently. His hands crawled up Yi-chen's arm, and made their way to her chin. Kei lifted her chin up, getting closer..as if he were about to kiss her.
Kiss her?! Yi-chen was absolutely embarrassed. Her blush turned as red as a pomegranate, if that was possible. She didn't dare look at Kei right in the eyes, she'd just....faint.. Probably? No, Yi-chen wasn't that shy.
They both stood in silence. The only sound would be the waves splashing among themselves. It was beautiful, and even more than that. Wonderful, and so amazing. The moon reflected against the gigantic ocean, making the waves seem transparent, like if the sky had fell onto the ground.
I need you...Kei...
Kei's fingers wrapped around Yi-chen's silky hair, rubbing it smoothly, and trying to look into her eyes, but she just looked down. She nibbled on her lower lip softly, and her head was filled with thoughts. Thoughts of her one and only, her true love.. Or so she thought.
"K-kei.."
"Hmm..?" He stared at her softly and lifted her chin up, waiting for what she had to say. Something wonderful..
"I-i...I...I lov--!"
"Kei! Yi-chen! It's time to go back inside! It's getting late and I have to drop Yi-chen off!"
Silence.
She felt as if she could crawl into a hole and rot, she felt no reason to live. Yi-chen couldn't admit her love to him. It was too..daring. And she didn't dare tell Kei, it was her secret.
They both looked down at the sandy ground, the wind blowing against their bodies. Kei lifted his head up and looked over at Sho, whom was standing just a few feet away, with a wide grin on his face. He chuckled gently at the silly man, and patted Yi-chen's shoulder.
"Ah..you should leave now. It's getting late. Goodnight, Yi-chen." He smirked softly at her, and rubbed her cheek gently and smoothly.
"Goodnight!" She bowed a couple of times and ran off to Sho. Yi-chen didn't dare look back. She was too..embarrassed..
I wonder what Yi-chen was going to say..
Kei sat along the beach, just where Yi-chen was sitting. His gaze met the moon and he sighed quietly, humming the tune once again.
Orenji no...taiyou...
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I know it needs lots of editing ^O^
Anyway, just so no one will get confused, I'll tell you what's going on. In the movie, Moon Child, an orphan named Sho meets a vampire named Kei. They both became very great friends and they become so close, as in brothers. So this woman named Yi-chen comes in the picture right? And Sho falls immediately in love with her. He swears she's his true love. Only the problem is, Yi-chen is in love with Kei. So it's a love triangle right there. xP If you want to see the movie go search it on google or something xD It's my favorite movie :3 I love Hyde(guy who plays kei)
Okay, now for the japanese lyrics. Those are a tune that Kei is always humming/singing in the movie. it means Orange Glow. Kei had a bestfriend, he'd stare into the ocean with him. But since they're vampires, they couldn't see the sun. So when his friend dies, he's staring out into the ocean, and the sun is coming out. His last words are "Here comes the sun" So that's why kei loves that song so much xPP
Now on to the story!
Oh! And you can criticize if you want, but don't go off saying THIS SUCKS because that hurts
I made this for fun.---
ORENJI NO TAIYO
'Kei. . .'
Orenji no...taiyou..
You're beauitiful when you smile.
"Heh."
Her dark hues wandered up at the cloudless sky. Her feet became cold and chills ran up her body, as the small, salty waves touched her feet. Yi-chen was alone this night. She wanted time alone. Her gaze lost in the ocean. She'd been thinking about Kei this whole time, her love for him wouldn't stop growing, little by little. She felt like crying. As if Kei had broken her heart. But no, that's not true. She felt like if Kei..didn't love her. She knew he didn't love her. But why?
Silence.
"What are you doing out here..?"
Kei...? Yi-che turned around suddenly, and stared at him. He didn't say her name.. He was so mysterious. She stared at him, quietly.
Kei smirked at her, his hands in his pockets. He kicked the sand playfully with his foot as he walked and looked down.
Yi-che couldn't help but stare at his beauty. He brought darkness into her..but she felt wonderful. It was such an odd feeling, she loved it. She bit her bottom lip gently, and stood up quickly.
"So..what's your answer..?"
He chuckled.
She wanted to tell him everything. Everything she felt for him. Her hands trembled and she looked down desperately.
"...."
Nakisou na... kao o shi te... eien no... sayonara..
He hummed the tune softly, and very gently. His hands crawled up Yi-chen's arm, and made their way to her chin. Kei lifted her chin up, getting closer..as if he were about to kiss her.
Kiss her?! Yi-chen was absolutely embarrassed. Her blush turned as red as a pomegranate, if that was possible. She didn't dare look at Kei right in the eyes, she'd just....faint.. Probably? No, Yi-chen wasn't that shy.
They both stood in silence. The only sound would be the waves splashing among themselves. It was beautiful, and even more than that. Wonderful, and so amazing. The moon reflected against the gigantic ocean, making the waves seem transparent, like if the sky had fell onto the ground.
I need you...Kei...
Kei's fingers wrapped around Yi-chen's silky hair, rubbing it smoothly, and trying to look into her eyes, but she just looked down. She nibbled on her lower lip softly, and her head was filled with thoughts. Thoughts of her one and only, her true love.. Or so she thought.
"K-kei.."
"Hmm..?" He stared at her softly and lifted her chin up, waiting for what she had to say. Something wonderful..
"I-i...I...I lov--!"
"Kei! Yi-chen! It's time to go back inside! It's getting late and I have to drop Yi-chen off!"
Silence.
She felt as if she could crawl into a hole and rot, she felt no reason to live. Yi-chen couldn't admit her love to him. It was too..daring. And she didn't dare tell Kei, it was her secret.
They both looked down at the sandy ground, the wind blowing against their bodies. Kei lifted his head up and looked over at Sho, whom was standing just a few feet away, with a wide grin on his face. He chuckled gently at the silly man, and patted Yi-chen's shoulder.
"Ah..you should leave now. It's getting late. Goodnight, Yi-chen." He smirked softly at her, and rubbed her cheek gently and smoothly.
"Goodnight!" She bowed a couple of times and ran off to Sho. Yi-chen didn't dare look back. She was too..embarrassed..
I wonder what Yi-chen was going to say..
Kei sat along the beach, just where Yi-chen was sitting. His gaze met the moon and he sighed quietly, humming the tune once again.
Orenji no...taiyou...
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I know it needs lots of editing ^O^
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