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Kay, so, this is my first time writing a song. It's not that good, it's actually really bad but, here it goes. . .

Miss Popularity

There she goes, Miss Popularity

She's got everything

Friends, Money, Clothes, Beauty

What more could she need?

Everything.

 

So,

She puts on a smile for the world

Trying her best

She's really nothing,

Nothing at all

 

Finally, here it comes!

While her friends make jokes,

She breaks down

Crumbling to nothing,

A depressed girl is all that is left,

of Miss Popularity

 

So,

She puts on a smile for the world

Trying her best

She's really nothing,

Nothing at all

 

But a smile is no longer her escape

Make-up isn't an opition

Her friends won't look at her

And what can money really buy her?

 

And now,

She begs for friendships,

But her friends never liked her at all

What is she to do?

What can she do?

 

It was fun to watch,

I must admit

 

The fall of Miss Popularity

And, the title "Miss Popularity" I'm still not sure about. I was thinking that or "The Fall of Miss Popularity" but if anyone has ideas, I'm open.

Feedback is greatly appreciated.

 
I like it, but in my honest opinion, it seems more like a poem than a song. But I guess that's because I haven't seen or heard the melody D;

Maybe you could like, make the melody on Finale Notepad or something.

I like it, though :]

No ideas for the title. Sorry.

 
Hm, very good Britneh =D

I have a very good idea of how I'm gonna sing this for you.

I'll post it when I put it on YouTube =D

~Mew

 
I think it's pretty good. I think the title should be "Miss Popularity." It's short, not a mouthful to say, and gets to the point of the song.

 
it was great! i think the fall of miss popularity would fit it better tho. i LOVED it!

 
Well now!

I wrote some notes for the very first stanza.

I wrote them for:

"There she goes,

 

Miss Popularity,

 

She's got everything;

 

Clothes, money, and beauty.

 

What more could she need?

 

Everything."

I wrote it, preformed it, and uploaded it in about seven minutes. So it's not great.

I paused in between the lines so you could follow with the lyrics. Kinda.

And Brit, if you don't like it, I'll edit the notes to something more of your planning.

I'll put it up when it uploads.

 
Hmn, it wasnt all that great.
Truthfully? That wouldnt be a song I would listen to.

Its good for a first try, though.
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well thats quite rude. neway, it think it ws great. i think its sorta funny how y'all know each other in like, real life!

 

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