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Streetlights.

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 11:09 AM ( #1 )

I couldn't find a topic about them, so I made one. If there already is another one, sorry!

I just wrote this poem, in about 5 minutes, so it's not very good, but I was wondering what you thought of it.

I love you

Did you know
That I love you?
Forever and ever
I always will

And did you know
That I will be there for you
When it hurts the most?
Just to let you know that
I love you

Because I love you
I will give it all up
Just to be with you
And know you love me too

I will wait for you
If you want me to
Because I love you

Did you know
That I love you?
Forever and ever
I always will.



Have you written any poems? Post them please.

Edited by Streetlights., 04 April 2009 - 11:11 AM.


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Posted 13 April 2009 - 07:46 AM ( #2 )

^^ I like that one =]

I write poems. I'm bored right now so I'll type one up. Most of mine are quite emotional.
This one is for my Babcia(grandmother)

For Babcia

I'm sorry I never
Showed that I cared.

I'm sorry I acted
Like you weren't even there
And now you're gone,
I'm in much despair.

It's been nearly a year
Since God took you away,
But I know for sure
That I will join you one day.

Until then,
Just know that I love you,
And I always did,
And I always will.
I'm proud to be your granddaughter.


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Posted 13 April 2009 - 07:52 AM ( #3 )

Nice :3

Here's mine, for Poetry. We had to choose an Adverb, then use it in every sentence.


Hurricane, Hurricane

Insanly, there's falling drops.
Insanly, they'll never stop.
Insanly, they'll beat against the ground,
Insanly, we'll flee this ground.

Insanly, Lightning streaks the sky,
Insanly, clouds beging to cry.

Insanly, rain falls to the ground,
Insanly, it falls all around.
Insanly, there's thunder, rain, and wind,
Insanly, A song of storms begins.

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Posted 13 April 2009 - 02:49 PM ( #4 )

*edit* Messed up

Edited by RawryCakes.x, 13 April 2009 - 02:51 PM.


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Posted 13 April 2009 - 02:51 PM ( #5 )

My horrible attempt at poetry


Dear Starfire
Dear Starfire,
I'd call you my friend,
But then I'd be a liar
'Cause you're more than just that.
You're just like the little sister
I never had.
I kinda hate MSN
It sucks so bad.
It won't let us talk,
But that doesn't matter.
It would rock
If one day we met.



Dear Ksenia
Dear Ksenia,
My Eurasian buddy
You know I love ya
And you always will

We are so alike
Yet so different
We both fail to spike
In volleyball

We’re both nerds
But still retarded
We have our words
Like weirdom.

Our typo differnce is huge
But that won’t stop me
From going those 8342 miles
Just to see you.


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Posted 13 April 2009 - 06:48 PM ( #6 )

I made ALOT for my friends on TT cuz I was feeling very poetic yesterday (:

It's in their inboxes/profiles. I might post them later on...

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Posted 14 April 2009 - 12:47 AM ( #7 )

I wrote ones to Michelle, Vivi, Esther. Michelle put my poem in her siggy.

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Posted 14 April 2009 - 01:21 AM ( #8 )

I wrote this just now:

TamaTalk~

This site is now my home,
I know it oh so well,
All the people are amazing,
Just like a pretty shell.

Each and every member,
Has their very special part,
A very special part,
In TamaTalk's heart.

From the crayon phase,
To the first member,
Each and everything,
We will always remember.

This place has made a difference,
A difference to me,
I made amazing friends,
Who I will one day see.

TamaChat is also great,
Its how I made some of my friends,
It lets us talk about life,
And even awesome trends.

I really can't believe,
That I ran into you guys,
While searching the interweb,
For random words like pies.

Every time I go online,
And I see that people are on,
I scream and yell and run around,
So loud that my neighbour can hear, Ron.

Everyone's crazy obsessions,
And things that people do,
It really makes me enjoy TT,
Its my favourite site, yes its true.

If anyone leaves,
if anyone goes,
I'll be devastated,
And full of woe.

So please no one leave,
And please no one go,
If you ever do,
My life will be so low.

All the topics,
And all the polls,
And all the games,
Make me go ''lolz''.

I'll never forget any of you,
I could calve your names onto a metal piece of knife,
I know that me and tamatalk,
Will be best friends for life.

Edit: I wrote this about my toy pig 8D:

I have a squishy little piggy,
Who's name is Chabeena.
I got him at a shop,
Close to the marina.

He's very very cute,
And very very nice,
He really makes me happy,
And adds joy to my life.

He's only very little,
But already really fat,
I don't want him to come close,
Come close to my cat.

His eyes are really funny,
And his tail is really thin,
I'd be really devastated,
If someone threw him in the bin.

Chabeena's legs are really short,
And his nose is really big,
I truly wouldn't want him to,
Go outside and dig.

His favourite food is cheese,
And his favourite drink is juice,
He's really not like other pigs,
He's different but has nothing to lose.

The liquid inside him,
Makes him quite big,
But that doesn't matter,
Because I love him to bits.

At first he was tortured,
Left inside a bag,
But now he found a home,
Unlike that dirty old rag.

He looks like a cartoon,
But no, he's actually real,
Just please believe me,
Okay, deal?

I could go on and on forever,
About how cute this piggy is,
But now its time to go,
And give this piggy a kiss!

(I call the pig Emilee, or Chabeena. Two names ftw.)

Edited by x.Cant//Knit.x, 14 April 2009 - 02:30 AM.


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Posted 14 April 2009 - 02:34 AM ( #9 )

I had some poems published in an actual magazine a while back. I'll find my book and show you them. Warning, they are poems with hidden meanings and they confuse most people. They are 5 short lines long and their meaning is like 1000 words.

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Posted 14 April 2009 - 11:47 AM ( #10 )

I haven't tried Poetry for a while =P
here's one I made for Ksenia. It took like 22 minutes to think up the right words x3

Ksenia:

I mailed you a message
one dull March-Time Day
I worked up the nerve
I said; It is okay.

I thought you my hero
you posted so much
I read them intently
your inputs and such.

you mailed me back
my heart seemed to mend
for you; Lovely Ksenia;
were finally my friend.

We used MSN
to communicate, then,
we bonded quite tight
and vowed till the end;

To be eachothers buddy,
despite the long distance
to live out our lives;
yet be internet sisters

I met your mom
who has a cool name
you taught me to shorten it
"lana" it became

there's ants in my laptop
fleas dwell in yours
i know you so much
but i want to know more.

I love our fun talks
about dinos and cows
about "fail", "win" and "cupcake"
about users, and now;

I want to come visit
my kalamari friend
i love her so much
until the end

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Posted 14 April 2009 - 09:50 PM ( #11 )

"When I write poems
It sounds so retarded
It sounds just like
Someone farted."

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 12:05 AM ( #12 )

This style of poetry is called Tanka. Its 5 lines. Nerdy poems.

Queen Elizabeth sits up
in a playground castle
sipping english breakfast tea -
clouds are coffee filters
brewed in sunshine.



Children lay in bed
reading them selves to sleep
as cats claw at time -
Dad snores like a train
choking on forty winks.


They gotta be good since they were published in a high class type magazine.

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 12:09 AM ( #13 )

Michelle, you are so poetic. My poems all sound reatarded.

Dear Emilee
Dear Emilee
Or eelime
You are so lovely
To hate you is a crime

We met yesterday
And became fast friends.
To you I say
Together 'til the end

Your awesome drawings
And our pooopfish too
I'll keep stalking
'Cause I love you

Edited by RawryCakes.x, 15 April 2009 - 05:41 PM.


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Posted 15 April 2009 - 07:05 PM ( #14 )

Love

Why am I trying?
I know not all feelings
are reciprocal.

For me, love is a fraction
That is not multiplied.

That fraction is divided.

//

Made it up on the spot.
My poems are published in my school's magazine.

I suck.

[When a fraction is reciprocated, it can be multiplied.]
My poems have dumb, yet strong meanings.

I should shut up now.

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 09:07 PM ( #15 )

Poems.....I'm bad at them....
It's because I'm bad in English compared to you guys D:

I'll give it a try.

Edit;; 2 hours and 1 poem. -wipes sweat- Here goes....

Ksenia~~

Oh Ksenia, My dear, My beautiful friend,
I will love you until the end,
I knew it right from the start,
Our love can't even fit in a chart.

The line's too long, too far to be seen,
It's exactly like the word, 'eternity'.
Actually, it can't even be described,
It's like a maze, unable to be aligned.

Because of that, of course you already know,
That a true friend will always be besides you so.
Unlike a mouse, a cat, & a dog,
We'd be like small dew drops in a fog.

But Ksenia, did you ever know?
Your skin shines like the snow,
You're eyes are like the sky of my life,
And it's because,

I Love You.

Edited by ilovekuchipa555, 15 April 2009 - 10:48 PM.


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Posted 15 April 2009 - 10:35 PM ( #16 )

^ Did you see the poem I wrote for you =3?

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 10:48 PM ( #17 )

^ Did you see the poem I wrote for you =3?

Yesh. I put it in my Profile ^^

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 11:00 PM ( #18 )

^ Hope you liked it=] <33
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Poem for the playdoughers:
Playdough and dinos
Which one dominates?
Who knows?
The playdough mates!

You are all loved, yes
Dearly by all.
Even when you're a mess
We'll help you when you fall
---
So random...

Edited by RawryCakes.x, 15 April 2009 - 11:08 PM.


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Posted 15 April 2009 - 11:06 PM ( #19 )

I did. ;D

Weiwei~~

Weiwei, Weiwei, Weiwei.
I could say your name forever.
I would never forget that,
Oh yes, never never ever.

Did you know that out love is bond?
Yes, you always make me fond.
You're Asian like me, & I'm proud,
I could walk around and scream loud.

We both are sometimes weird,
But whatever, that's why I'm here.
Like a rainbow without one streak,
We all are differently unique.

Like a Lemon & a Lime,
A Nickel & a Dime,
Sometimes, we seem to be same.
And that is exactly why, you're my friend.

I Love You.

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 11:09 PM ( #20 )

^ I <33 it.
It's going in my profile =]