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tamacrazy_101

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Posted 21 October 2009 - 07:43 PM ( #81 )

I wrote a palindrome! [Reads the same forwards and backwards] Mine is by word though, not letter. I'm not that crazy.
It was hard and I got a headache. Tell me what you think?

Fire

Fire
is raging beauty.
Flickering flames;
Dangerous nevertheless, but beautiful.
Viewers captivated for dancing blazes.
Memories created wonderfully, visualizing
enticing, yet destructive
spectacles.
-reflect-
Spectacles
destructive yet enticing.
Visualizing wonderfully created memories.
Blazes dancing for captivated viewers.
Beautiful, but nevertheless dangerous;
flames flickering.
Beauty raging is
fire.


-big exhale-

Edit: Forgot a close tag. xD

Edited by tamacrazy_101, 22 October 2009 - 02:50 PM.


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Posted 22 October 2009 - 01:25 AM ( #82 )

^It's great! It actually works, unlike some things I've read. :3

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Posted 22 October 2009 - 02:31 PM ( #83 )

^Thanks a bunch. :)

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Posted 22 October 2009 - 02:52 PM ( #84 )

This one's more of a song, but I don't know where to post it.

From your problems,
Isolate yourself away.
The darkness is your path
And it’ll change the end of this day.
So here we go, we just don’t know
If we’ll make it out alive.


Shaun, in your box
Shut out the world around you.
Let no light in,
It’s just too good to be true.
Shaun, in your box
Forget the wrongs
Exaggerate the rights
And we’ll be okay,
We’ll be okay,
And we’ll be okay.

Keep your head down low,
It’s the way to go.
These fantasies keep us alive.
Without them we would crumble
Keep them standing,
Held up high.

Shaun, in your box
Shut out the world around you.
Let no light in,
It’s just too good to be true.
Shaun, in your box
Forget the wrongs
Exaggerate the rights
And we’ll be okay,
We’ll be okay,
And we’ll be okay.

Those names we go by
We’re nothing without them.
So don’t let it get to you
That these things aren’t true.
It just doesn’t matter,
As long as we believe
We’ll keep ourselves from falling.

Shaun, in your box
Shut out the world around you.
Let no light in,
It’s just too good to be true.
Shaun, in your box
Forget the wrongs
Exaggerate the rights
And we’ll be okay,
We’ll be okay,
And we’ll be okay.

Don’t let it get to you.

Why, when I read this, did I read it to the tune of 'Ladies & Gentlemen'? o;
I do love it though.
I mean the song.
And your poemy-song. [:

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Posted 23 October 2009 - 03:09 AM ( #85 )

^I didn't know it worked to Ladies & Gentlemen. o_o
It was written for Shaun Jennings, a friend of Short Stack.
And thanks <3

Edited by x.P O K E R F A C E, 23 October 2009 - 03:10 AM.


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Posted 18 November 2009 - 06:07 PM ( #86 )

SO WHAT.
So what if I steal your whiteout?
So what if I take your pencils
And throw them over there?
So what if I give them to my friend,
Who hides them where
You'll never find them?
So what if I threaten to rip your book?
So what if I tell my friends
You have cocaine in your desk,
When all you have are erasers.
So what?
I dont know.


Lol, that was the most retarded poem I've ever written...
Based on a true story xD

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Posted 21 November 2009 - 11:10 AM ( #87 )

I love your poem, Jae. I hadn't read that before. It's lovely. Makes me want to go look at a fire. xDD

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Posted 08 December 2009 - 12:18 PM ( #88 )

I wrote a poem for English for yesterday called 'War is Insane'. I might post it later.

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Posted 13 December 2009 - 01:13 PM ( #89 )

I wrote this after the tragedy at Fort Hood.

"Dawn"

The sun has set within the walls of these distressed souls
No fragment of the light that once was can be seen through the pain that quakes within their livid spirits
God hears their infuriated cries and weeps with hot tears as he watches his children suffer
The mountain that stood before them stands now as a pile of ashes that steams with the heat of tragic malice and brutality
The question that many have resting on their lips is now pouring out like an angry flood
Why?
The answer to this, we may never comprehend
However, there is something to be remembered.
Tragedy is the blow that shakes our world and laughs in the face of everything good
But the love and warmth that follows is the dawn of the next beautiful day