Posted 13 July 2009 - 11:46 PM
*This is NOT the love story I was mentioning in my other topic. This one is kind of depressing xD
*It's actually one of those stories where a girl is writing in a journal, (Hence the name "Unwritten") But, in some scenes (Such as the introduction) She is NOT writing in a journal. (When she is, you'll know)
*I actually JUST made this Intro, so I'm not sure how it turned out, I actually may edit it later on so, blah.
*I'll explain the plot later.
*Please tell me what you think if you decide to read
Thanks, here's the introduction:
In a moment everything can change. One moment you could live a happy, simple, typical life, then, it could all change in one night of unfortunate events. Sometimes it just feels like a dream, or more accurately, a nightmare. Like Iíll just wake up soon. Like it never happened outside of my subconscious. I can still remember that morning clearly. My exact emotions, all the smells in the air, the blurriness my vision experienced, the shaking of my hands, how all the sounds I could hear suddenly just went blank. I can remember every piece of it. I still remember what it was like to go into sheer depression. How the tears that soaked my face never seemed to end, or even vanish for that matter. I could still feel the tears on my face, as if they dug into my skin as a permanent reminder of that day, of those events.
Thanks for reading! Please post criticism, compliments, and if you want me to continue. Thanks
Posted 15 July 2009 - 06:08 PM
Posted 15 July 2009 - 06:41 PM
Okay I'll post more once I write it
Wow, that sounds good. You should post more. It hooks the reader DEFINITELY 'cause I'm wondering, what happened? Keep going!