DemonSlayer5050
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Okay people now before I begin the introduction of yet ANOTHER dark story of mine, I do have a few notes.
*The intro isn't very dark so, don't worry kids xD
*Just a beginning. I plan to continue it, but I would like criticism.
*I'm actually not to proud of the beginning, I just kind of started it but I don't expect it to be amazing.
And that's about it. Enjoy.
She had long brown hair with elegant curls, slender chocolate eyebrows with dark brown eyes, light cherry lips slathered with shimmering lip gloss, pale cheeks glowing crimson, a glimmering smile the brightened up anyone’s heart. That is the glorious appearance of the most popular girl in my school. Such beauty, such grace, no soul can resist her magnificent looks and warm heart. Long red nails, long smooth legs, cuts and dried blood on her wrists. That is the appearance of the most popular girl in my school. That is the appearance of me.
I know, short xD You'll live. Criticism? Comments?
*The intro isn't very dark so, don't worry kids xD
*Just a beginning. I plan to continue it, but I would like criticism.
*I'm actually not to proud of the beginning, I just kind of started it but I don't expect it to be amazing.
And that's about it. Enjoy.
She had long brown hair with elegant curls, slender chocolate eyebrows with dark brown eyes, light cherry lips slathered with shimmering lip gloss, pale cheeks glowing crimson, a glimmering smile the brightened up anyone’s heart. That is the glorious appearance of the most popular girl in my school. Such beauty, such grace, no soul can resist her magnificent looks and warm heart. Long red nails, long smooth legs, cuts and dried blood on her wrists. That is the appearance of the most popular girl in my school. That is the appearance of me.
I know, short xD You'll live. Criticism? Comments?