Maria's song.

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Trainwreck

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So um, yeah. I wrote another song but this time it's for Maria. I really hope she likes it, though it's not very good, at least I don't think so but I tried my best. Feedback is always great.

Silver hearts speak golden lies,

Nights spent alone with these thoughts inside our heads,

And if tonight is my last,

Don't forget that these words aren't dead.

 

Crimson truths,

Write these words down and never forget,

But don't remember,

Read these words when her world is over,

I hope she would never have to.

 

Keep these letters burried in secrets,

Write these memories in the back of your mind,

And if all is at end,

Read the words I left behind.

 

Crimson truths,

Write these words down and never forget,

But don't remember,

Read these words whenher world is over,

I hope she would never have to.

 

Nausea is only a side-effect of looking back,

Everyone knows it never helps!

Haven't you seen it on the silver screen?

She looks back, he smiles, she goes,

And all he's left with is these side-effects we suffer.

 

Stick together and hold on tight,

Gotta brave these awful fights,

But when it's all dead and gone,

Forget to remember these words I wrote.

 

Maria, say goodnight.

 
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Britt! Once again, you have true talent. <3

Maria will be very pleasantly surprised when she logs onto TT tomorrow :)

You're an amazing songwriter.

 
D=

Zomg, Britt that is amazing.

It's so deep, I envy you. I sit down to write a song about 3 times a day, I so far [& I've been doing this for a while] I've only made one I actually like. & it's un-finished. You're so talented, I'm jealous. xD



 

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