This was partially inspired from Cassie by Flyleaf. Listen to that song, it's lovely.
Warning: This song is mostly about abuse
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I used to know a girl named Roxine
Oh yes, what a beauty
Her hair composed of silk
And eyes made of crystal
They shined so bright
Full of love and light
Such a shame they turned to white
And she bleeds
On the floor
As they watch and wait
For her end to come
The words they wrap around her
The insults start to kill her
And you won’t do a thing
Cause then you’ll become their next victim
Yes, you say you love her
So please hurry up and save her
But why am I asking you
When you’re the one who broke her
I know a boy named Matthew
Oh my, how so handsome
His heart made of stone
And mind filled with death and hate
I think he once was kind
But I’m not so sure now
What a horrible fate
And he screams
Till she dies
When he takes a pause
Suddenly it’s free bait
The words they wrap around her
The insults start to kill her
And you won’t do a thing
Cause then you’ll become their next victim
Yes, you say you love her
So please hurry up and save her
But why am I asking you
When you’re the one who broke her
May she rest in peace?
May he burn in hell?
I hope she is reborn
I hope he’s condemned to pain
I wish for her to stay.
I wish for his days to end.
I knew a girl named Roxine
Oh yes, what a beauty
I knew a boy named Matthew
Oh my, how so handsome
Don’t let it come to this
Get help quick.
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The Girl Named Roxine
Started by
popprincess83
, Aug 20 2009 03:40 AM
Posted 06 September 2009 - 01:10 PM ( #2 )
This is a great song! Is it a proper song with a rhythm, or is it a partially-rhyming poem?
Posted 06 September 2009 - 03:21 PM ( #3 )
This is popprincess83 under a new username.
I didn't really think of rhyming when writing this. I just wrote what was coming. There's some rhyming here but it wasn't exactly done on purpose.
I'm glad you like it. I'm very proud of this one.
I didn't really think of rhyming when writing this. I just wrote what was coming. There's some rhyming here but it wasn't exactly done on purpose.
I'm glad you like it. I'm very proud of this one.





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