White_Roses2
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I started writing this story yesterday. It's a love story, and I hope it works. It's about a girl called Rose and Shadow Prince(sounds gay) from another world called Envy. Envy is the son of a Dark Queen who named her seven children after the Seven Deadly Sins. They are all evil, then Envy meets Rose and realizes what life should be (but he pretends to still be evil).
So what do you think of it so far?
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Envy (written from Rose's point of view.)
It's funny how envy is the thing people hate to feel. The thing you feel when another person kisses your crush. The feeling you get when you see a beautiful girl at the prom and you are wearing the colour that looks worst on you. The feeling you get when you lose.
It's also funny how Envy is my greatest love. It's funny how I love the thing that knows me so well but could kill me without feeling anything more than the million things that love me so much.
If I could see the future I would know. I would have re-thought everything. I would look closer at the things that matter to me.
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That's all I have so far.
So what do you think of it so far?
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Envy (written from Rose's point of view.)
It's funny how envy is the thing people hate to feel. The thing you feel when another person kisses your crush. The feeling you get when you see a beautiful girl at the prom and you are wearing the colour that looks worst on you. The feeling you get when you lose.
It's also funny how Envy is my greatest love. It's funny how I love the thing that knows me so well but could kill me without feeling anything more than the million things that love me so much.
If I could see the future I would know. I would have re-thought everything. I would look closer at the things that matter to me.
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That's all I have so far.