I have no idea why I wrote this.

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Your name would be what I carve into that bullet,

What I write on the knife's blade.

Your name would be the last thing I say as I jump.

It's you who I'd think about as I hit the ground,

But forget about as death takes me.

I have no idea what the inspration for it was, and why I'm sharing it with you.

But what do you think?

 
It's not bad, but it doesn't sound very poetic. I don't really like the way it flows, if you know what I mean. It's a bit choppy. If you change your wording around a bit, I bet it could sound a lot better. But it's a fairly good start. :)

 
Thanks, Kendal, I think that was my whole motive.

Thanks, Nikki, that really helped, but I don't think I'm going to turn it into a whole writing project.

And thanks Keeley, that just brightened me up.

:D

 
Very nice. It seems inspirational, though I can't quite describe it. I like it. :)

 

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