A poem I wrote

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lainabug01

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It's about music.

Don't say it's stupid or anything, okay?

Music is a living thing;

It moves and flows,

Music is something that

you never truly know,

Music is an art;

it comes from your

soul and heart,

Music is a way

I can just be me,

Music is a way I can..

Be free.

 
Be careful with what words you use to make your rhymes. Sometimes it can come off as childish if you rhyme with something silly, and look like you're trying too hard. It was fairly good, but if you practice your rhyme & rhythm some more you could make it even better. :)

 

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