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Somthing like Matilda.

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Posted 07 November 2009 - 06:28 PM ( #1 )

I have no idea what to call this,so when you reply,help me think of names,too.

Chapter 1

I was born June 9th 1998,
It was cold and I never really felt welcome when I was rushed out into the cruel word,but lets fast forward to when I was 8,My mum my dad and my two older sisters,quite a mean bunch.Every day,I would go down to the kitchen,the smell of eggs and french toast welcomed me,but I never ate any of it,no matter how good.I prefer to cook my self,I have for years,I thought it would stop them from thinking i was dumb,but it never did,I got so used to cooking my own meals,so I still do.I made a waffle and sat at the table next to my 12 year old sister,Cynthia,I had saw a a funnyad in the telly,and decided to talk about it,but in the middle of my senence cynithia spoke up,"Honselsty,your too old to be watching such silly things"she snickerd.

Thats all I got,sorry for spelling mistakes my middle fingers is brokw.






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Posted 14 November 2009 - 08:09 PM ( #2 )

June 9th is my Birthday. (: Just 1997, not 1998.

I think you did well. Reminds me a lot of Matilda!
Though I'd love to hear some more of the story. [:


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Posted 15 November 2009 - 03:15 PM ( #3 )

I like it.

I like Matilda a lot, and this is somting that is really close to being just like Matilda. Cooking by herself, but your story has two older sisters, and Matilda has one older brother. Overall, keep going!