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~Yogurt~

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Posted 17 November 2009 - 05:02 PM ( #1 )

I don't know what you would call this but it sounds cool,


"I saw the burnt houses,the fresh smell of ash tickled my nose.'
I crept closer,the smell got stronger,I tripped,coverd in black"



What would you call this?

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Posted 18 November 2009 - 12:25 PM ( #2 )

I'd call it a Free Verse or a Prose Poem, but I'd leave the title up to you - it's your creation after all :)