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I wrote this during lunch today. Any comments?


So everyone, lets work hard
For our own destiny.
Opening all the curtians
Of the new world.

The summer cicadas sing
Their haunting pslams of life.
To triumph the hardships
Of the fated lives.

Now that all of the troubles are done,
Lets all smile and be happy.
Listen, to the angelic winds,
Of summer, the peace, of this town.

Move onto the new world,
Everyone, take my hand!
We'll open the windows,
To breath the new world's air.

Cicadas voices cry into our ears.
Their songs brough pride and
Courage to us.

[Let_It_S h i n e]

TK, this is really good O:

I like it (:

[GotchiGirl96]

The organization is kind of choppy, like it doesn't really flow together. I also don't understand what cicadas have to do with the story.

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The organization is kind of choppy, like it doesn't really flow together. I also don't understand what cicadas have to do with the story.

I was reading up on insects in Science, and we read ciadas. So then I was kinda 'inspired' by them ^.^;;

[.::Le:.:Cheshire:.:Chat::.]

amazing claire, purely amazing <3