A poem.

TamaTalk

Help Support TamaTalk:

This site may earn a commission from merchant affiliate links, including eBay, Amazon, and others.

Goggle-Face

Well-known member
Joined
May 31, 2008
Messages
2,174
Reaction score
11
I wrote this during lunch today. Any comments?

[SIZE=9pt]So everyone, lets work hard[/SIZE]

For our own destiny.

Opening all the curtians

Of the new world.

 

The summer cicadas sing

Their haunting pslams of life.

To triumph the hardships

Of the fated lives.

 

Now that all of the troubles are done,

Lets all smile and be happy.

Listen, to the angelic winds,

Of summer, the peace, of this town.

 

Move onto the new world,

Everyone, take my hand!

We'll open the windows,

To breath the new world's air.

 

Cicadas voices cry into our ears.

Their songs brough pride and

Courage to us.

 
The organization is kind of choppy, like it doesn't really flow together. I also don't understand what cicadas have to do with the story.
I was reading up on insects in Science, and we read ciadas. So then I was kinda 'inspired' by them ^.^;;

 

Latest posts

Back
Top