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monkeez_cutiez

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Posted 14 December 2009 - 01:30 AM ( #1 )

Ok, i don't really want to be a singer, but I thought I could get your opinion on some of my songs. Well, really, they're just lyrics.

Verse 1

I have never, ever believed in love.
But baby, you send that thought into the above.
I never thought that things would be this way.
You make me want to come out and say, hey!


Bridge

Love is for believers if they feel the strength
They've never even felt a single tenth, ehh!

Chorus

I (pause) don't even know if I really believe.
Because I feel like a single leaf, fluttering in the breeze.
I go one direction, then in the other.
Maybe we should just be with one another.
(1 second pause)
If I really believe (carry lieve...and stop)




That's as far as I got. When you post your opinions, depending on how good you think it is, I'll write the rest!

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Posted 16 December 2009 - 11:09 AM ( #2 )

You could be a song writer, and write songs for famous singers if you don't wanna be a singer, but want to write songs.

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Posted 17 December 2009 - 06:25 PM ( #3 )

hey i was just reading your siggy. Get this started is sung by Black Eyed Peas..