my song

ok this is my song. It is called stop living a fantasy:

verse one

one night, when I was dreaming

I was a princess that everyone was seeing

but one day I got trapped In a castle

Lost and not bieng found

chorus

(and I said) stop living a fantasy

wake up to the world you see

stop living a fantasy

wake up to the world you see

verse two

one dream I was a mermaid

and I even had My own maid

but then I got tooken away

so far,far away

Repeat chorus.

bridge

and I was dreamin' and dreamin' but I wasn't seein'

was that this isn't real world

and I was playin' and playin' but It just wasn't paying

'cause It's time to wake up

verse three

so now Ill say goodbye to my cherry pie

'cause now I gotta go away

and i'll never know just why

I had this dream anyway.

repeat chorus twice.

THE END

keep in mind I am only nine so it isn't that good.

thanks for reading!



from Pink Hippopotumas

aka katieecob

For a nine year old, that is excellent. BESTSELLER HERE PINK HIPPOPOTAMUS COMES!

I like it.

But there's a typo I see. "Tooken" isn't a real word, you'd say "Taken".

But, like most songs, you kinda need a song to sing this to. I like the lyrics.

Since this strikes me as some Taylor Swift-like story, I sang it to a beat like "Our Song". Would that be accurate?

Yeah, great job! Keep writing!

to goggle face, it's more like you belong to me.

well,that's what i sort if sounds like.

but I made up my own tune

and OMG,the lyrics actually are

stop living a fantasy

wake up to the world you see

stop living a fantasy

wake up to reality

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oh yeah, if you are cofused why I think this is my post, Pink Hippopotumas is my other account.

If I could rate it, I'd give it a six. Cause of the spelling mistakes, and I just find it also a total copy of Taylor Swift's song. Sorry.

- Nine Year Old froggybebe