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.:Rawry:.

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Posted 28 December 2009 - 01:22 AM ( #1 )

Judge me on a scale of 10.And tell me what I should call it.
V1:We're always talking,about school and that
And we never talk aout anything else
Will we ever feel like we have lived here in this world
And will we ever be together....ever
Chorus:But that night
When you took me down the path
through the silence of the night
And the planets all alighned when
you took my hand that night
And your breath was all I heard
Underneath the silence of the night
V2:So now were sitting on the sand
Thinking time will never end
The sun was blaring
Your eyes were sparkling
And the sea was blurry through the haze
But do you really love me or will it snap
just like that and the tears will come around
Chorus
V3:And now all my childish fears
have been washed away
and Ive promised my self
never to love you again...Yeah never again...
But will that promise be broken.....
I cant let go now....
Never..ever...never ever.....
chorus X 2 [reapet last line and fade]
Its unamed,so please help me figure out a name!

Edited by .:Rawry:., 28 December 2009 - 01:22 AM.


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Posted 28 December 2009 - 01:40 AM ( #2 )

Yeah. It's good. And for the name, hmm... Maybe "That Night" Haha. I don't know. xD

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Posted 08 January 2010 - 02:23 AM ( #3 )

I have already started a topic called My Song. Please read topic titles before you title yours.