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x.xRainingx.xSunshinex.x

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Posted 07 February 2010 - 09:56 AM ( #1 )

I know you lied, know you cheated, hold the drama, I didn't need it, you said your sorry, but I just don't see it,
'Tis okay, I love you anyway :D

RATE 1-10

Edited by x.xRainingx.xSunshinex.x, 07 February 2010 - 04:27 PM.


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Posted 07 February 2010 - 04:26 PM ( #2 )

She wanted to play the game of life, to all her lives, she took a knife, she only has one life left, will she use it?Wanna bet?

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Posted 07 February 2010 - 06:14 PM ( #3 )

I liked the first one better =)

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Posted 11 February 2010 - 07:12 PM ( #4 )

Thank you, what do you like about it?

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Posted 11 February 2010 - 08:25 PM ( #5 )

Sounds like a boy-girl relationship. They broke up, he tried to apologize, she didn't believe him, but she still likes him anyway.


Then again, it could be any type of relationship :S

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Posted 13 February 2010 - 11:06 PM ( #6 )

9 out of ten good job

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Posted 18 February 2010 - 11:04 AM ( #7 )

I like it.
The first part sounded like a song.
<3

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Posted 18 February 2010 - 11:17 AM ( #8 )

Yeah, I was gonna say, it sounded like a song. :D

9/10 for the first one!
And 8/10 for the second. :]

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Posted 21 February 2010 - 09:00 AM ( #9 )

OHMYOSH, Thanks yew! ;D

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Posted 28 February 2010 - 07:22 PM ( #10 )

I really like the first one. 8/10
It sounds so musical, like a lyric poem. I love it. <3

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Posted 01 April 2010 - 07:18 PM ( #11 )

Hm...I changed it a bit:

I know you lied, I heardyou cheated, hold the drama, I really don't need it, you said sorry but I don't belive it, but it's always gonna be okay, cause I'll always love you anyway.