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Twin

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Posted 17 February 2010 - 06:54 PM ( #1 )

Here's a poem I made real quickly. Sorry if it may seem a little choppy. Hope you like it. (:


They sleep with broken dreams,
They cry with shattered tears,
A death causes thee to lose a part of their soul,
A death causes pain, sorrow, and hate

One cannot describe how sad one may feel,
One cannot describe the painful memories

Slipping on black colored attire,
Carrying red roses and gifts,
You stare and place your flower amongst the long wooden coffin,
A priest says his prayer, though he hardly knew thee,
Why would he bless us? If he hardly knew us

A death is pain to the heart, soul, and mind,
One cannot live with such pain in their life,
A death should not be witnessed, it cause such grief,
That why I say stop with the murder

You cause others to weep,
You cause others to toss and turn in their sleep,
The deaths that you cause for your pleasure, and for mine,
They make people cry. They make other people die.

They sleep with broken dreams,
They cry with shattered tears,
A death causes thee to lose a part of their soul,
A death causes pain, sorrow, and hate


It's a little all over the place so bear with me. I wrote it on the spot. It's not as good as some of the other poems I've seen out there; I just thought I'd post something up. (:

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Posted 17 February 2010 - 09:10 PM ( #2 )

its beautiful
i absolutly loved it

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Posted 18 February 2010 - 04:37 PM ( #3 )

Thanks~ Glad you liked it. ^^
Here's one I wrote up for a Valentines Day contest:
And this one has a title. XD

Our Very First Valentine Kiss

I see his eyes move to mine,
As he touches my lips,
Sealing the Kiss,

This passion inside me,
Roars with such hunger,
My arms curl around his neck,
His hands stay, cupping my Face,

Many emotions are stored in a kiss,
Anger, Love, Passion, Fear,
All of them connect,
In a Kiss,

His lips part from mine,
As he says, 'I love you,'
I smile weakly,
The shock of the kiss still inside Me,

He takes my hand and walks me to the door,
As he unlocks the door and pushes it open,
My eyes widen with adoration, and love as I look Around,

The room was tinted a deep pink with petals everywhere,
Candles lit the dark hall and house, leading the way,
The house smelt of roses, fresh and sweet,
And sitting on the table was a picture,
Of Our Very First Valentine Kiss.