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mametchi_luver

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Posted 18 February 2010 - 07:00 PM ( #1 )

okay so i deleted the poem in here because i did it wrong

Thank for correcting me goggle-face

Edited by mametchi_luver, 18 February 2010 - 08:48 PM.


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Posted 18 February 2010 - 07:26 PM ( #2 )

I like it, But...

The "U"? No, not a nice touch, even though it's acrostic.

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Posted 18 February 2010 - 08:47 PM ( #3 )

OOPS thanks for pointing that out.

Hahaha i text too much i forgot to spell you correctly

im stupid