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x.xRainingx.xSunshinex.x

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You would not belive

your money, if ten-million Easter bunnies,

Took over the world as I feel asleep,

Cause the fill the empty boxes, and don't taste any better then foxes

You'd think me dumb but I'd just rather chew...gum.

I like to eat jelly beans, but not all those, chocolate bunnies.

It's hard to want to eat one when I'm awake, because it's gross for God's sake,

Cause after I eat that dung, I'll get a thousand hugs, and get-well cards and presents, too.

Bunny-ears upon my head, and easter treats beside my bed, a yoyo just hanging by a thread.

I like to eat jelly beans, but not all those, chocolate bunnies.

It's hard to want to eat one when I'm awake, because it's gross for God's sake,

Please take these chocolate bunnies back, (take them away from here)

Because they're making me an insomniac(take trhem away from here),

Why do I always get those bunnies?(every year!)

The always make it hard for me to sleep.

To ten-million Easter bunnies, I'm crazy cause I don't think they're yummy,

I got happy and hopeful eyes as they said farewel.

I'll know where several are, if I feel like running them over with my car.

Cause I saved two made them tell me where the rest are~

I like to eat jelly beans, but not all those, chocolate bunnies.

It's hard to want to eat one when I'm awake, because it's gross for God's sake(x3)

I'm still working on it. BETA.

 
The rhyming seemed really forced.

"Cause the fill the empty boxes, and don't taste any better then foxes

You'd think me dumb but I'd just rather chew...gum."

Was pretty stupid. Sorry.

 
I agree with Claire, to be honest. >.>

Not much to say, actually. Claire said all I wanted to say.

 
The rhyming seemed really forced.
"Cause the fill the empty boxes, and don't taste any better then foxes

You'd think me dumb but I'd just rather chew...gum."

Was pretty stupid. Sorry.
I agree Miss Claire :)

Also, please fix the Grammar and Punctuation.

 
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