SkyCrystal
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I tried to write something with a rhyme scheme aaaa bbbb cccc dddd and 10 syllables in each line. But I couldn't really get it to fit in with any basic foot. Here it is (oh ya, and there's an incredible lack of puncuation... lol. I wrote it that way and I'm to lazy to fix it now):
Water tumbles from the heavens so fair
sown by the hands of the dark dreary air
nature is frozen in a distant stare
watching the sky for a peak of one glare
The fire of space, the ominous glow
To bring back florescent, musical flow
The beasts of the land and the green that grows
Any of those would be likely to know
The sun has, as always, been birthed once more
Revealing the splendid mountains galore
The heaving of plains have breathing restore
Falcons take flight from the earthy grown floor
Driplets and stragglers will be left alone
Flourishing mildews make living of stone
Creatures arise and untangle their bone
Answering only to time and to throne
Here's one about fishies
Splish, splash
Into the river I dive.
Swim, dash
To the place where they thrive;
Gleaming arrows of water,
The masters of tide
Remembering which and not to ride.
They shine all around me, each a silver star
Forever they’ll be watching our world from afar.
Still don't have names for either. Any ideas?
~SkyCrystal
EDIT: Thought I'd go ahead and add my other poem to this one instead of making another topic.
Water tumbles from the heavens so fair
sown by the hands of the dark dreary air
nature is frozen in a distant stare
watching the sky for a peak of one glare
The fire of space, the ominous glow
To bring back florescent, musical flow
The beasts of the land and the green that grows
Any of those would be likely to know
The sun has, as always, been birthed once more
Revealing the splendid mountains galore
The heaving of plains have breathing restore
Falcons take flight from the earthy grown floor
Driplets and stragglers will be left alone
Flourishing mildews make living of stone
Creatures arise and untangle their bone
Answering only to time and to throne
Here's one about fishies
Splish, splash
Into the river I dive.
Swim, dash
To the place where they thrive;
Gleaming arrows of water,
The masters of tide
Remembering which and not to ride.
They shine all around me, each a silver star
Forever they’ll be watching our world from afar.
Still don't have names for either. Any ideas?
~SkyCrystal
EDIT: Thought I'd go ahead and add my other poem to this one instead of making another topic.
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