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Well, it's just a song parody that I made into a "sorry" letter to my friend.

A parody of "Captains and Cruise Ships" by Owl City.

Opinions?

I am stuck in this mood

For the week, it won't go away

And you're with friends on the swings

In the playground, you won't talk to me

Violent nights re awake

The hatefulness that we've acquired

From your voice things seem bad

And I'm so sick of all this madness

Cheerful lights go dark

And it's upsetting, but what can I do?

Our friendship is so dead

But I am so used to talking to you

Darker lights fill the night

Bluer skies just won't reappear

As I inspect and analyze

All these feelings I do not recall

If you're still mad when the sun

In the west prepares to go down

Skim your thoughts and put those long

Hateful words in the trash can

In my mind your voice

Is still yelling, how can it be fixed?

Empty thoughts feel cold

'Cause I am so used to being with you

Count the times we have fought

Absorb all this data

Please forgive me?

When you explore hidden minds

And tiny dumb mishaps

Throughout your life

Can't you still apologize?

When we're outside,

Please, not on the phone.

For all these times,

We've argued.

I wish you're my friend;

'Cause I feel alone.

When you were here

We'd play, but since you've left

I don't have anyone

Though I feel upset

I can't believe this is really so bad

Old ex-friends, and brand new best friends

Always cheery, and never mad

When I shouted that hateful remark

I shouldn't have said it.

I'll shout it in all honesty

For the sake of our friendship

I'll run down the long dirt driveway

And say "I'm sorry" to you

 
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Amazing. Truly amazing.

You really got to write more. This sure is one of your talents, Krsitin. <3

 

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