Hopeless Haze.

Hopeless Haze

In his eyes glazed with distrust

The shadow of a doubt is cast

Between memories of his past

This pyre of nightmares will combust

A spark, then a flame

these pictures will burn

Not knowing what he had became

To the point of no return

Lighting the match, his greatest ambition

A blaze tonight, he will provoke

They'll never suspect this planned ignition

He'll whispers his welcomes through the smoke

His nightmares lying on the pyre ablaze

Shrouding the world with a hopeless haze.

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I'm not sure what this even is, hahaha.

Constructive comments?

It's BRILLIANT.

They - they seem like lyrics, no?

Very meaningful ones too. ;P

That's amaaaaaaazing!

Turn it into a song~ they sound very much like lyrics.

It's awesome!

That was EPICC

Yes, those sound like lyrics. You could turn it into a song, as TAMAGIRL2008 said.

Very well done and clever. Good work

Thanks! Haha, it is starting to look like lyrics to me, and I'll try to extend it..