A passage that I wrote.

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Goggle-Face

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Yes, I have this on my profile. But I'm sure no one scrolls down to read it.

You're risking yourself for that prize. That one thing you want. You go through life-long of pain just to keep it in your sight, risking all your limbs for it, your own being, and you want to give your soul away just to get that one thing. You're willing to either be as perfect as possible, or willing to kill just to get closer. You would die without it. If someone takes it away, out of your sight, you begin to panic, and go frantically searching for it. After finding it, after scaring everyone around you from a psychotic rage, you hold it close, not letting it go, but of course, you'll never truly own it, it's just back in your sight. But, when you're close to losing it, when you're about to snap from the stress put on you, when you think the world is just teasing you, you begin to realize that one thing, that one thing you want so much, is just out of your reach...

 
Very good! You're very talented. Are you really only 13?

I must ask, what was is that you were thinking of when you wrote this? I know it could possibly be one of the "let the audience figure it out for themselves" sort of thing, but I was just curious to see if you had something specific in mind.

 
I had two songs in my head. "Higeki" and "Hayashi".

Both of them represent the hardships gone through people who feel like they're trapped in one life forever. Where they feel like they're going to snap.

 

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