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Running, running, running.
Thats all I could do, a psycho old man was chasing me down for trick or treating at his door.
"I'll get you!" yelled the old man.
I dare not look back, I guess this is a bit off what Mum meant for not trick or treating alone.
"Leave me alone!" I screamed in exhaustion, I was getting slower.
I looked back, he wasn't slowing down, not even that tiny bit.
"You measly kid!" he yelled, I don't even knew what I did other than trick or treating.
"Whats your problem old man?" I yelled in pain, my legs were growing weak from all the banging on the sand.
I looked around, seeing the cold starry night and the blue waves from the ocean.
I grabbed a boost bar from my candy pouch, hoping they would help me keep my energy up.
I couldn't stand running any more, I ran into the rock pool for easier to run on ground.
Now I wished I never did that, why?
I slipped, my head collided with the rock and all I saw was black.
I woke up, first I saw the colour green.
I pushed my body off the ground with my hands, I suddenly realized I was no longer in the beach, probably no longer in Victoria.
I was stuck, in a lovely green jungle.
But at least I had enough candy in my candy pouch to last me around 3 weeks.
I heard foot steps, and rustling in the leaves.
I stood up, aware of another form of life near.
I kid poked his head out the bush.
"Hello!" he said, it was such a weird voice I almost didn't understand what he said.
"Uh, Hi," I replied, trying not to be rude.
[SIZE=14pt]TO BE CONTINUED[/SIZE]
Running, running, running.
Thats all I could do, a psycho old man was chasing me down for trick or treating at his door.
"I'll get you!" yelled the old man.
I dare not look back, I guess this is a bit off what Mum meant for not trick or treating alone.
"Leave me alone!" I screamed in exhaustion, I was getting slower.
I looked back, he wasn't slowing down, not even that tiny bit.
"You measly kid!" he yelled, I don't even knew what I did other than trick or treating.
"Whats your problem old man?" I yelled in pain, my legs were growing weak from all the banging on the sand.
I looked around, seeing the cold starry night and the blue waves from the ocean.
I grabbed a boost bar from my candy pouch, hoping they would help me keep my energy up.
I couldn't stand running any more, I ran into the rock pool for easier to run on ground.
Now I wished I never did that, why?
I slipped, my head collided with the rock and all I saw was black.
I woke up, first I saw the colour green.
I pushed my body off the ground with my hands, I suddenly realized I was no longer in the beach, probably no longer in Victoria.
I was stuck, in a lovely green jungle.
But at least I had enough candy in my candy pouch to last me around 3 weeks.
I heard foot steps, and rustling in the leaves.
I stood up, aware of another form of life near.
I kid poked his head out the bush.
"Hello!" he said, it was such a weird voice I almost didn't understand what he said.
"Uh, Hi," I replied, trying not to be rude.
[SIZE=14pt]TO BE CONTINUED[/SIZE]