Lady Conscience
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Well here it is:
Tears streamed down her face, the cold air stung against her wet skin. High above in the sky, threatening dark clouds appeared.
The hurtful words and taunting spun round her head as she ran.
Suddenly the sky gave way and poured down.
She didn’t stop running. The rain soaked through her clothes making them heavy. Her sneakers were drenched and pools of water were forming inside them.
She stopped and looked up into the rain, then sunk to the floor.
Rochelle paced round the kitchen, glancing up at the clock every so often. The minutes ticked on and Trusty, her little sister wasn't home yet. The elder girl slumped back into her chair and stirred her now cold coffee.
Her ears pricked up at the sound of scrabbling at the door then it burst open and standing there was Trusty. She was soaked and her eyes were red. Rochelle rushed over and threw a towel round the small girl, whilst dragging her up the stairs to the bathroom.
"This is the part where you beg me for mercy whilst I think of a punishment for you."
She looked over at her younger self who was washing her Ebony black hair. "Muhh" was the reply she got.
That was when she exploded.
"Forgodness sake Trusty! Where the heck have you been? School finished six hours ago!"
Trusty looked up into her sisters wide eyes and opened her mouth as if she were to speak. Nothing came out. She tried again. Still nothing.
Panic washed over the girl and she began to cry.
Rochelle rushed downstairs and dialed 999.
Done. This is the first chapter. I haven't thought of a title. This is my first SERIOUS story I've written and I'd appreciate a little advice. Just no flaming.
Tears streamed down her face, the cold air stung against her wet skin. High above in the sky, threatening dark clouds appeared.
The hurtful words and taunting spun round her head as she ran.
Suddenly the sky gave way and poured down.
She didn’t stop running. The rain soaked through her clothes making them heavy. Her sneakers were drenched and pools of water were forming inside them.
She stopped and looked up into the rain, then sunk to the floor.
Rochelle paced round the kitchen, glancing up at the clock every so often. The minutes ticked on and Trusty, her little sister wasn't home yet. The elder girl slumped back into her chair and stirred her now cold coffee.
Her ears pricked up at the sound of scrabbling at the door then it burst open and standing there was Trusty. She was soaked and her eyes were red. Rochelle rushed over and threw a towel round the small girl, whilst dragging her up the stairs to the bathroom.
"This is the part where you beg me for mercy whilst I think of a punishment for you."
She looked over at her younger self who was washing her Ebony black hair. "Muhh" was the reply she got.
That was when she exploded.
"Forgodness sake Trusty! Where the heck have you been? School finished six hours ago!"
Trusty looked up into her sisters wide eyes and opened her mouth as if she were to speak. Nothing came out. She tried again. Still nothing.
Panic washed over the girl and she began to cry.
Rochelle rushed downstairs and dialed 999.
Done. This is the first chapter. I haven't thought of a title. This is my first SERIOUS story I've written and I'd appreciate a little advice. Just no flaming.