monkeez_cutiez
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This is a poem I wrote after writing my Criminal Minds story. The story focused mainly on a very violent murder attempt on JJ. This is from her point of view shortly after the attack, before anyone finds her.
It hurts so much
I wish I dead
It's killing me slowly
Messing with my head
Something inside me writhes and twists
There's nothing more than I fear
Than to die like this
The baby
Dear god, the baby
She'd better be ok
Or...more pain
If I survive
The blood is soaking me
Like red ribbons,
Entwining their way over my skin
I'm cold
I'm disoriented
So this is what dying feels like...
It hurts so much
I wish I dead
It's killing me slowly
Messing with my head
Something inside me writhes and twists
There's nothing more than I fear
Than to die like this
The baby
Dear god, the baby
She'd better be ok
Or...more pain
If I survive
The blood is soaking me
Like red ribbons,
Entwining their way over my skin
I'm cold
I'm disoriented
So this is what dying feels like...