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** I just want to note that I was only nine or ten when I wrote this, I just remember writing this story and wanted to share it with TamaTalk, I only edited it a little bit, changing only punctuation, spelling, and capitals.
I was walking home from school, enjoying the afternoon because it was still sunny but cooling down.
I kicked up a few leaves on my right, not noticing anything beside myself for once. Finally I was in my own world.
“Hey,” Harmony said, pouncing on me, it was annoying and scared me.
“Will you please not do that,” I asked. Harmony slowly tipped her head forward, giving me a look.
“Why? Do you have a problem with it?”
“Yeah, I do.”
“Well,” She started, grabbing my shoulder and walking in front of me,
“Why do you have a problem?” Harmony took her hand off my shoulder and placed it on her hip.
“It scares me, and annoys me.”
“Oh? Maybe I should do it more then,” Harmony said. She flicked my nose and skipped off.
“See you tomorrow!”
“Yeah,” I said. “Great.”
Edit: Sorry for the cruddy indent
I was walking home from school, enjoying the afternoon because it was still sunny but cooling down.
I kicked up a few leaves on my right, not noticing anything beside myself for once. Finally I was in my own world.
“Hey,” Harmony said, pouncing on me, it was annoying and scared me.
“Will you please not do that,” I asked. Harmony slowly tipped her head forward, giving me a look.
“Why? Do you have a problem with it?”
“Yeah, I do.”
“Well,” She started, grabbing my shoulder and walking in front of me,
“Why do you have a problem?” Harmony took her hand off my shoulder and placed it on her hip.
“It scares me, and annoys me.”
“Oh? Maybe I should do it more then,” Harmony said. She flicked my nose and skipped off.
“See you tomorrow!”
“Yeah,” I said. “Great.”
Edit: Sorry for the cruddy indent
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