Posted 20 July 2011 - 02:58 PM
Uh, what. I dunno what you expect, the only way we can tell what you need to improve on to be a better writer is if you show us a sample of a story/essay you wrote. Otherwise, none of us can help you. Although for starters, try not to type in all caps and start a sentence with a lowercase letter. Just sayin.
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