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Eternal Mametchi Fan

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Posted 29 January 2012 - 08:02 AM ( #1 )

Ode to Tamagotchi

Nobody seems to care about me
Except for my Tamagotchi.
Nobody would ever understand,
Except for the pet I hold in my hand.

People ignore me,
They leave me all alone.
But as long as I have my Tamagotchi,
I'll feel right at home.

When I have nobody to trust,
And nobody to trust me,
I can always rely on my best friend--
My loyal, caring Tamagotchi.

So even when I'm feeling down,
I can't help but to smile,
Knowing that my Tamagotchi
Will stick with me the whole while... :newmametchi:

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MusicalAngelgotchiOfLove

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Posted 29 January 2012 - 05:22 PM ( #2 )

Nice poem! ;)

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Posted 27 April 2012 - 01:39 PM ( #3 )

Nice job! Impressive! (It won't let me use many smilies so ignore that this is typing) :) ( it'll only let me use :tarakotchi: :newmametchi: :babytchi: :hanatchi: .)

Edited by Ringotchi123, 27 April 2012 - 01:41 PM.


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Posted 29 April 2012 - 04:51 AM ( #4 )

Very well done. :)

I enjoyed reading it. I can't ever make poems that rhyme. The ones that rhyme are the most fun to read! [ in my opinion ] I'd like to read more of your poems if you've written any others.
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Posted 30 April 2012 - 06:42 PM ( #5 )

your poem is great, EMF! you've really shown us how capable you are at writing, and not just fanfiction. ;) i, for one, am terrible at writing poems (xDDD) but you certainly aren't. i would love to read some more of your writing, EMF!

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Posted 30 April 2012 - 08:58 PM ( #6 )

Great poem! It's exactly how I feel sometimes. Nice rhyming too!

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Posted 05 May 2012 - 02:54 AM ( #7 )

I like it! I like writing songs/poems too, I have 33 pages of them on my computer. I don't post them here though, they're mostly four pages long and have my name or address in. I do try writing some Tamagotchi poems, but they turn out really bad...

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Posted 05 May 2012 - 07:42 PM ( #8 )

This is a beautiful poem! It kinda relates to me and how I feel at times. By the way I am MametchiBub=^x^='s sister. :D She is taking good care of your Tama. The Tamagotchi she sent to you was originally mine but I had to give it to her because she gave me her iPod! I really didn't want to hand over that Tamagotchi. Oh well, I hope you enjoy it.

Edited by retromonsta, 05 May 2012 - 07:44 PM.


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Posted 05 May 2012 - 10:04 PM ( #9 )

xD Retro
You make me laugh all the time
heheh look it looks like I'm doing a rhyme!

When you are with me when we're by ourselves at home,
I know I'll never be alone

When I watch a scary move on the t.v,
I know you'll be there hugging me

EVERYONE please don't think my sibling is a boy
She is a girl, yet a tom boy, who likes to watch boyish movies about pirates "Ahoy!"

I just made that up :/
Really bad isn't it? xD

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Posted 06 May 2012 - 03:16 AM ( #10 )

Ahaha I'm not a tomboy!!! Here's a poem for you:

FOR MAMETCHIBUB=^X^=


This is a poem for you to see,

I know probably won't believe me,

You can be quite silly at times,

I can't believe this actually rhymes!


I like pirates and scary movies you say,

Well what if I said you made models of Tamas out of clay,

Actually that sounds kinda cool,

They really should teach us how to do that at school!


Now this poem is quite boring,

I'm sure by now you would be snoring,

If not then I want to say I love you can't you see?

You will always mean the world to me.


Well that kinda failed... Oh well not too bad for a beginner!

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Posted 06 May 2012 - 03:18 AM ( #11 )

THAT DID NOT FAIL
I LOVE IT XXOXOX




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