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Posted 22 May 2012 - 08:48 PM ( #1 )

You are the only one I let in,

The only one I call my best friend.

You are the only one I see,

I don't even see me.


You are the only one whom I love,

Sky at night, I look above.

I see you in all the beauty you are,

even though you can't see quite as far.


You are the only one I'd let take control,

One and only who makes me whole.

You are the only one I let say no,

Whom I don't see as a foe.


You are the only one worth my time,

Though I'm not worth yours.

Going under the couch,

Hiding on the floor.


You are the only one who commands me,

The only one who understands me.

Sweeter than evening light,

Banishing my day's blight.


You are the o n l y one.


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Posted 23 May 2012 - 01:41 AM ( #2 )

This is truly beautiful. Very nice work! :}

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 03:38 AM ( #3 )

Aw, I love your poems! ♥
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