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dazzilitchigirl

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Posted 01 October 2012 - 06:58 AM ( #1 )

This is based on two lines I wrote about a year ago...they turned out to be true.

Life is just a wheel spinning round,
Bringing happiness and sadness all around.
It's weird how the tables turn,
It's weird how you always yearn,
For what you had a year before
But gave away without a thought.

With every failure comes a feeling of success,
I surely can be good, even if not the best.
After all, I'm one of the smallest in this giant world.
I can never tell them what I know - I can only be told.
I wait till I grow older - that's all there is to do,
I wait till I gain friendship - whether with them or you.

What made me happier before,
Now it makes me sadder more.
I should have known this wouldn't last,
I should have known that life runs fast.
Life will outrun me, I always lose the race.
You will outrun me, not like I have a choice.

This poem is a failure, but somehow it succeeded.
And hopefully, somehow, a new success has seeded.

Edited by dazzilitchigirl, 02 October 2012 - 10:31 AM.


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Posted 02 October 2012 - 07:37 AM ( #2 )

Whoa. Wow, you've shamed me, Dazzmina! xD My writing skills are so much lower!
In other words,
I LOVE IT!!!!

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Posted 03 October 2012 - 10:52 AM ( #3 )

You actually like it? I thought this was one of my worst failures...if everyone likes these things so much, I should start entering writing like this in competitions, rather than stuff with no separate verses or rhyming.

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 07:31 AM ( #4 )

I thought of a title for this. It's called With Every Failure.