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Zachary Konreignes

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Posted 13 October 2012 - 12:11 AM ( #1 )

Let's get a bite to eat...

I'm sure you'll find something sweet.

Eating fast food without a care,

Bending our wills without a care...

I sing while you're out...

Then you startle me with your shout.


It's the late night love song,

No, I'm not wrong.

I know what you're thinking,

"Is he sleeping?"

We're in love, that's just a fact...

Let's make one last pact...

The pact of love, to be like this forever,

From me, I know you'll sever,

You waver between me and freedom,

You savor that we can see them...


Our order's here, so let's eat,

Then show me how to find the beat...

The beat to your heart...

Playing Mario Kart...

I can get close to you only in that way.


It's the late night love song,

No, I'm not wrong.

I know what you're thinking,

"Is he sleeping?"

We're in love, that's just a fact...

Let's make one last pact...

The pact of love, to be like this forever,

From me, I know you'll sever,

You waver between me and freedom,

You savor that we can see them...


We're the new love of the age,

Turning the world to a new page,

Not held in a little cage,

Let's kiss one more time...

I'll kiss you and then I'll shine.


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Eternal Mametchi Fan

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Posted 13 October 2012 - 06:43 AM ( #2 )

This is a very nice song...much better than the garbage lyrics they have in music these days. :P Nice work. ^_^

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Posted 13 October 2012 - 07:39 PM ( #3 )

Why do you always write these songs about me wow.
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Posted 24 November 2012 - 03:08 AM ( #4 )

I don't really understand it, but it has good rhyming and syllables in each line. :)

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Posted 25 November 2012 - 09:59 PM ( #5 )

Nice poem.
Who is it that you see, though? :huh: