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Before You Leave Forever


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dazzilitchigirl

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Posted 25 November 2012 - 12:07 PM ( #1 )

This isn't a love song and it is NOT about a person, a group of people, anything that's ever happened to me, or basically anything that matters.

Before you leave I want to say
It was a great day today.
Before you leave I want you to know
It was all just a show.

I know that's a lie
But how else can I say goodbye
Before you leave forever
I'll lie that I never ever...

Before you leave I want to do
Anything as long as it's not with you.
I've got to find an new life, without you inside
Then finally you'll be free of my lies

I know that is nonsense
But how else can I make sense
Before you leave forever
I'll show that I never ever...

Before you leave I NEED to know
Why you just couldn't ever say no.
Before you leave I NEED to know
Why you just simply had to go.

I know that is not good of me
But how else can I make you see
I won't miss you, I'll finally be free
Of everything that came with you

I know, but that is what's true
I need to let go of you.
But you were never alive anyway.
I just want to say...
Nothing can make you go away.

Some of you will know what this is about. Some won't. But please give constructive criticism rather than asking what it's about.

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Posted 04 December 2012 - 07:03 AM ( #2 )

It's about me because I was offline for a week...?

Anyway, I believe it is one of your best poems, although some lines do not make much sense. I like it a lot actually. :)

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Posted 04 December 2012 - 11:24 AM ( #3 )

*awards EMF the Prize For Finding A Way To Think That Every One Of Dazzmina's Poems Is About Her*

No, it's not about you. If I ever wrote a poem about you, I would show it to you before posting. Anyway, didn't I say it's not about a person...?