Before You Leave Forever

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This isn't a love song and it is NOT about a person, a group of people, anything that's ever happened to me, or basically anything that matters.

Before you leave I want to say

It was a great day today.

Before you leave I want you to know

It was all just a show.

I know that's a lie

But how else can I say goodbye

Before you leave forever

I'll lie that I never ever...

Before you leave I want to do

Anything as long as it's not with you.

I've got to find an new life, without you inside

Then finally you'll be free of my lies

I know that is nonsense

But how else can I make sense

Before you leave forever

I'll show that I never ever...

Before you leave I NEED to know

Why you just couldn't ever say no.

Before you leave I NEED to know

Why you just simply had to go.

I know that is not good of me

But how else can I make you see

I won't miss you, I'll finally be free

Of everything that came with you

I know, but that is what's true

I need to let go of you.

But you were never alive anyway.

I just want to say...

Nothing can make you go away.

Some of you will know what this is about. Some won't. But please give constructive criticism rather than asking what it's about.

 
It's about me because I was offline for a week...?

Anyway, I believe it is one of your best poems, although some lines do not make much sense. I like it a lot actually. :)

 
*awards EMF the Prize For Finding A Way To Think That Every One Of Dazzmina's Poems Is About Her*

No, it's not about you. If I ever wrote a poem about you, I would show it to you before posting. Anyway, didn't I say it's not about a person...?

 
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