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Poll: Random Poem 4 (5 member(s) have cast votes)

What do you think of it?

  1. OMG IT IS AWESOME AND AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (2 votes [40.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 40.00%

  2. It's really good! (2 votes [40.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 40.00%

  3. It's good. (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  4. It's okay. (1 votes [20.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 20.00%

  5. I don't really like it. (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  6. It's not the type of poem I like. (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  7. NO I HATE IT, IT IS SO OFFENSIVE AND FAILED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

What's good about it?

  1. EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  2. The rhyming (1 votes [10.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 10.00%

  3. The words (2 votes [20.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 20.00%

  4. The font and/or colour (doesn't really count, but okay...?) (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  5. The meaning (3 votes [30.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 30.00%

  6. The fact it's about me (1 votes [10.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 10.00%

  7. The fact it's not about me (2 votes [20.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 20.00%

  8. NOTHING! (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  9. Other (please say what in post) (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  10. Not sure... (1 votes [10.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 10.00%

What's bad about it?

  1. NOTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (1 votes [12.50%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 12.50%

  2. The rhyming (2 votes [25.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 25.00%

  3. The words (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  4. The font and/or colour (doesn't really count, but okay...?) (1 votes [12.50%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 12.50%

  5. The meaning (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  6. The fact it's about me (1 votes [12.50%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 12.50%

  7. The fact it's not about me (1 votes [12.50%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 12.50%

  8. EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!! (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  9. Other (please say what in post) (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  10. Not sure... (2 votes [25.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 25.00%

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dazzilitchigirl

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Posted 17 December 2012 - 09:23 AM ( #1 )

This is just a random poem dedicated to four people. Only two of them are likely to be reading this, but I don't think I have to name them. :)

You didn't tell me lies
And you didn't run away
That is all I need
In a good friend today.

You didn't go against me
You always did defend me
At first I thought it was a game
Or a dream, not real...

You didn't leave me behind
While you go someplace
Where I can't go
Because of my age...

You didn't disappear
But everyone else did.
That's not a lie
I'm all too used to goodbyes.

Maybe it's just me
Or maybe, really
Something has come true
That I never thought it would do.

Note to a person who I don't have to name: If you want to say this is about you (and others), then this time, I'm not going to deny it. ;)

Edited by dazzilitchigirl, 17 December 2012 - 09:24 AM.

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The Ultimate Doomer

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Posted 18 December 2012 - 06:14 AM ( #2 )

Am I one of the four people? :o

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Posted 18 December 2012 - 06:44 AM ( #3 )

It is for Fwoggy, violetchilluvr3, me, and Doomer. Doomer and I are the ones who are likely to read it. :P

It is a very nice poem, thank you for writing it! The only problem is some of the words do not rhyme quite right, but that's okay. ^_^

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Posted 18 December 2012 - 09:50 AM ( #4 )

Am I one of the four people? :o


Look at EMF's guess and my reply to see if you're right. :)


It is for Fwoggy, violetchilluvr3, me, and Doomer. Doomer and I are the ones who are likely to read it. :P

It is a very nice poem, thank you for writing it! The only problem is some of the words do not rhyme quite right, but that's okay. ^_^


For someone who has guessed wrong about the meaning of all my other poems...that's a very good guess and is correct! :)
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