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Spaceship - Poem by me


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Kuribotchi

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 01:28 AM ( #1 )

so I started to right a little poem but I ended up carrying it on after I finished it. I hope you like it, I'm always trying to write good poems. so here is the finished result. It's called spaceship..

Can we runaway forever,

on our own little endeavor,

Because I built a little spaceship,

So we can soar above the ocean strip,

we'll be like birds that follow a course,

you and me will be like the royal air force.

Except we both have one-way tickets,

we're not coming back, like the cricket ball that Charles Thornton hit

maybe we'll take a break on Jupiter

but the thing is our accelerator is stuck on one hundred percent

but all I can say is that our time will be well spent.


Edited by Kuribotchi, 28 December 2012 - 01:30 AM.


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Posted 28 December 2012 - 07:08 AM ( #2 )

Love it! xxxx

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 02:35 PM ( #3 )

That is SOOOOOOOOO awesome!
My new favorite~