I was inspired by dazzilitchigirls poem.
My poem
An open book has not been read
A restless soul has long since lead
A warrior sings an open tune
A life goes by in one short moon
People are judged as time goes by
People are met with an honest lie
One hopes to never leave so simply
But captured sickness has no sympathy
A newborn bird fails to fly
A clock stops ticking as time goes by
A ready tiger has no claws
The world we know of is full of flaws
People are judged as time goes by
People are met with an honest lie
One hopes to never leave so simply
But captured sickness has no sympathy
One lost a leg. One lost an arm.
They are bullied, But it's no harm
Some fail to see what is the truth
Some lives are like an empty booth
People are judged as time goes by
People are met with an honest lie
One hopes to never leave so simply
But captured sickness has no sympathy
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Posted 01 February 2013 - 03:32 PM ( #3 )
That's way better than my poem! The meaning's not obvious, you have to think about it. All I can do is make plain sentences rhyme, but you make it seem more musical. 
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Posted 01 February 2013 - 07:30 PM ( #4 )
No, you have WAYY better poem skills than I do.That's way better than my poem! The meaning's not obvious, you have to think about it. All I can do is make plain sentences rhyme, but you make it seem more musical.
