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shapeshifter alice louisa axon

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Posted 02 March 2013 - 12:28 PM ( #1 )









hi everyone! this is a book im writing, it's about Alice and Louisa, two young princesses. they are faced with difficult challenges as they to be accepted in a world that, unfortunately, is unable to accept anything but the 'norm'. this novel touches on some of the extreme things that happen in our world, such as abusive parents. THIS IS A BOOK FOR OLDER READERS. for the sake of tamatalk i shall delete any swear words. i will remind you once again, the things that happen to the young girls are rare events and if any of what happens in this book happens to you TELL SOMEONE. 

 

now that I've got the mini lecture over, i thought it would important that they don't live on earth :) pls tell me what you think of my story (i want to be a part time writer when im older) i wont mind if you say its rubbish (tht doesnt give you an excuse though... ;) ) anyway! on with the story! 



 

 

 

 

 

Chapter 1- Louisa
 



I remember the day I first opened my eyes to the world. Even though it was a
bleak hospital it seemed beautiful and full of colour. I was wrapped in a soft rainbow coloured blanket with gold trimming. I was placed

gently into my mother’s arms, I stared into her dark eyes. I felt weird like there was part of me missing and then I realised why. I had

always had someone else speaking in my head, and now that voice was gone. I
wailed, yearning the comfort of another voice that didn’t come. After a few minutes I was put in a large cot, and although I was surrounded by people

I felt alone. Suddenly my mum’s screams filled the room and then another
wailing interrupted mine. Then I heard it. The voice! It was back!

 

I waited impatiently for the person that held that voice, and then another baby

was placed by my side.

“she’s got red hair” I heard my farther mutter, what did that matter?
I blinked at her, my sister.

 

Alice.

 

She stared back at me, and there we lay, comforted by each other’s presence.

 



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Posted 25 May 2013 - 01:30 AM ( #2 )

We grew up closer than the sky and the clouds, always on the same wave length. I was the only one who could snap her out of her dreadful curse placed on her when she was one month old. She very frequently activated her curse, because our parents decided that because she had red hair, that she had to be evil. So they punished her for every little thing such as being sat with her back not perfectly straight, in which case she would need her back whipped until there was no skin left on it. She still had to do training and school so her skin never properly healed.

I was always there for her when she needed me.

“You’re so lucky Sapphire and John” she never called Sapphire and John ‘mum’ and ‘dad’ “got back before they could put that horrible curse on you” Alice sighed, her shoulders slumping.

“I know. It was just a couple of extreme anti-royalists, but maybe mum and dad interrupted the spell and it might not be completed so it will go away in a couple of years” I replied soothingly.

“I hope so” she muttered then suddenly she said “I’m scared to make friends in case we fall out and I hurt them”

“Well, who needs friends? After all I’m always here” I grinned at her and she smiled back gratefully.

It seems to be quite a full blown conversation for a couple of six year olds to have, but us shape-shifters mature fast. We find out who we are destined to at the age of sixteen and at the age of twenty two we carry on ageing just not in looks.