hi everyone! this is a book im writing, it's about Alice and Louisa, two young princesses. they are faced with difficult challenges as they to be accepted in a world that, unfortunately, is unable to accept anything but the 'norm'. this novel touches on some of the extreme things that happen in our world, such as abusive parents. THIS IS A BOOK FOR OLDER READERS. for the sake of tamatalk i shall delete any swear words. i will remind you once again, the things that happen to the young girls are rare events and if any of what happens in this book happens to you TELL SOMEONE.
now that I've got the mini lecture over, i thought it would important that they don't live on earth pls tell me what you think of my story (i want to be a part time writer when im older) i wont mind if you say its rubbish (tht doesnt give you an excuse though... ) anyway! on with the story!
Chapter 1- Louisa
I remember the day I first opened my eyes to the world. Even though it was a
bleak hospital it seemed beautiful and full of colour. I was wrapped in a soft rainbow coloured blanket with gold trimming. I was placed
gently into my mother’s arms, I stared into her dark eyes. I felt weird like there was part of me missing and then I realised why. I had
always had someone else speaking in my head, and now that voice was gone. I
wailed, yearning the comfort of another voice that didn’t come. After a few minutes I was put in a large cot, and although I was surrounded by people
I felt alone. Suddenly my mum’s screams filled the room and then another
wailing interrupted mine. Then I heard it. The voice! It was back!
I waited impatiently for the person that held that voice, and then another baby
was placed by my side.
“she’s got red hair” I heard my farther mutter, what did that matter?
I blinked at her, my sister.
She stared back at me, and there we lay, comforted by each other’s presence.